for A Demon Lord's Hero5/13 c6 Predator99
Bit too edgy for me. I know Shriou is known for his borderline retarded speeches, but this is pushing ir.
Bit too edgy for me. I know Shriou is known for his borderline retarded speeches, but this is pushing ir.
4/20 c4 Church21
Im really thinking the only pairing for this version of Shirou can be Sarafall. Unless they are a few hundred years older then him he will veiw them as infants. His veiw point of koneko is of a sad broken abused 5 year old. He even calls Akeno a young girl even though they are the same age. Their is so much cool about this story but at this point its so overly focused on the mental condition of dxd characters you might as well call this Shirous psychiatric guide to dxd. It wouldnt be so bad if you didnt make Shirou so condecending about it. Like he is veiwing everyone from a much higher position. He acts like a grown man surrounded by broken toddlers even though they are all roughly the same age as him.
Im really thinking the only pairing for this version of Shirou can be Sarafall. Unless they are a few hundred years older then him he will veiw them as infants. His veiw point of koneko is of a sad broken abused 5 year old. He even calls Akeno a young girl even though they are the same age. Their is so much cool about this story but at this point its so overly focused on the mental condition of dxd characters you might as well call this Shirous psychiatric guide to dxd. It wouldnt be so bad if you didnt make Shirou so condecending about it. Like he is veiwing everyone from a much higher position. He acts like a grown man surrounded by broken toddlers even though they are all roughly the same age as him.
4/20 c2 Church21
I really love this story and most things about it. The only problem with it I see is that it cant seem to figure out wether the MC is Shirou or Archer. The life experience shown is something that Shirou doesnt really have. Shirou is a 17 year old whos fighting experience is pretty much just a grail war. He may be a very mature 17 year old due to needing to be for the most part self reliant sure but a 17 year old all the same. You can overlook the
massive armory he possesses and say it’s because of prolonged exposure to Archer that he has all those weapons and due to the fact he can pretty much absorb battle experienceas to why he can use them. What i can’t understand is why he acts like hes 30 years older then he is though. Pretty much every character in DXD has a tragic backstory that forced them to grow up quickly so maturity wise they should be similar to Shirou so for him to have the mindset that hes an adult and all these peole roughly the same age as him are all toddlers is really kind of ridiculous. Koneko that he refers to as a child and has been through nearly as much shit as Shiro is only like two years younger then him. When your a senior in highschool you dont think of sophomores as little diaper wearing children. The other thing I really can’t understand is Shirou’s position with Serafall. He is apparently a king himself with his own peerage yet still Sarafall’s queen? You cant really be both. Can’t complain to much cause I love this version of Asia and the later Xenovia inclusion is cool as hell its just a bit confusing
I really love this story and most things about it. The only problem with it I see is that it cant seem to figure out wether the MC is Shirou or Archer. The life experience shown is something that Shirou doesnt really have. Shirou is a 17 year old whos fighting experience is pretty much just a grail war. He may be a very mature 17 year old due to needing to be for the most part self reliant sure but a 17 year old all the same. You can overlook the
massive armory he possesses and say it’s because of prolonged exposure to Archer that he has all those weapons and due to the fact he can pretty much absorb battle experienceas to why he can use them. What i can’t understand is why he acts like hes 30 years older then he is though. Pretty much every character in DXD has a tragic backstory that forced them to grow up quickly so maturity wise they should be similar to Shirou so for him to have the mindset that hes an adult and all these peole roughly the same age as him are all toddlers is really kind of ridiculous. Koneko that he refers to as a child and has been through nearly as much shit as Shiro is only like two years younger then him. When your a senior in highschool you dont think of sophomores as little diaper wearing children. The other thing I really can’t understand is Shirou’s position with Serafall. He is apparently a king himself with his own peerage yet still Sarafall’s queen? You cant really be both. Can’t complain to much cause I love this version of Asia and the later Xenovia inclusion is cool as hell its just a bit confusing
4/10 c20 Guest
Alright, SIOC’s sister in this context.
Idk maybe Kuro? Miyu? Sakura? Prob not Saber or Rin. Maybe another OC like Serafall’s dead witch ex?
Alright, SIOC’s sister in this context.
Idk maybe Kuro? Miyu? Sakura? Prob not Saber or Rin. Maybe another OC like Serafall’s dead witch ex?
4/4 c26 Guest
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3/6 c26 Church21
Fantasticly written story I really enjoyed the read. My only real critique is that I dont like the way Shiro veiws other characters. He sees people that are literally his own age as children. You could make the argument that he has alot of traumatic life experiences that made him mature more then his natural age but you could make that exact same argument for every side character in DXD not named Issei who was literally the only character in DXD that had a somewhat normal childhood. If anything Shiro should veiw the other characters in his agegroup as peers instead of infants.
Fantasticly written story I really enjoyed the read. My only real critique is that I dont like the way Shiro veiws other characters. He sees people that are literally his own age as children. You could make the argument that he has alot of traumatic life experiences that made him mature more then his natural age but you could make that exact same argument for every side character in DXD not named Issei who was literally the only character in DXD that had a somewhat normal childhood. If anything Shiro should veiw the other characters in his agegroup as peers instead of infants.
3/3 c26 gamingshirou23
Yeah man, saw some disgusting thing on Webnovel. A "writer" copied this peak and shamelessly broadcasted it as theirs. Go to Webnovel, DXD: Emiya Shirou, Aerle. I already reviewed it and warned people there. Please do the same.
Yeah man, saw some disgusting thing on Webnovel. A "writer" copied this peak and shamelessly broadcasted it as theirs. Go to Webnovel, DXD: Emiya Shirou, Aerle. I already reviewed it and warned people there. Please do the same.
2/14 c26 vparadox12122000
Did anyone else see this being copied in Webnovel?
The copy is just stretching it out by cutting the chapters.
DxDEmiya Shirou by Aerle
Did anyone else see this being copied in Webnovel?
The copy is just stretching it out by cutting the chapters.
DxDEmiya Shirou by Aerle
1/5 c7 guestrando
hey not sure if you are still on here but thought you would want to know someone is copying your work for this story as their own
book/dxd-emiya-shirou_31318578108478905###
hey not sure if you are still on here but thought you would want to know someone is copying your work for this story as their own
book/dxd-emiya-shirou_31318578108478905###
12/24/2024 c26 yesyesyes1212
And once again you left the biggest cliffhanger for us, well i hope you are still alive somewhere, make sure to keep yourself healthy, i dont want any of my favorite authors to suddenly drop dead
And once again you left the biggest cliffhanger for us, well i hope you are still alive somewhere, make sure to keep yourself healthy, i dont want any of my favorite authors to suddenly drop dead
12/21/2024 c10 yesyesyes1212
It was peak, it was the best representative of excalibur, you are now officially one of the best writers i have ever known, i wish you the best life without regret
It was peak, it was the best representative of excalibur, you are now officially one of the best writers i have ever known, i wish you the best life without regret