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3/5/2020 c1 Guest
This is truly a pathetic attempt at literature. Instead, try reading mr grimjaw!

WOW! Fanfiction author "mr grimjaw" just uploaded a new story and it is SOOO good, forget about this trash heap and head on over to his new story titled "the second coming of blackbeard" It was a crazy RWBY and one piece cross over that is to DIE for!
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11/3/2018 c8 6miguelzero24
nice
9/4/2018 c1 2NZpa
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9/2/2018 c1 NqEbl
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8/2/2018 c1 arctroopercat
your grammar is atrocious
8/1/2018 c8 Sasuke75249
nice would tatsumi get a tegiu
2/14/2017 c2 soulverse2022
Nice keep up the good work and please update soon
9/20/2016 c1 s
U suck plz don't write fanfics in English if Ur so bad that a middle schooler's English is better
10/14/2014 c1 3The Stargazing Shadow
Even though I like that kind of plot, your grammar is terrible. When speaking about a 3rd person, verbs are different than in 1st or 2nd persons. For example: The verb 'To Realize' In 1st and 2nd person, the verb doesn't change - It stays as 'Realize'. However, if it is in 3rd person, the verb is written as 'Realizes', with a 's' on the end.

Be careful with the grammar: it can make the reading worse or better.
10/1/2014 c1 Guest
whatever language you speak fluently, use that language because this is difficult to read
9/24/2014 c1 4Salaeren
This is difficult to read in English. If I may make a suggestion, do you have a language other than English that you speak? Preferably one that you speak fluently? As it is now, the grammar and sentence structure will turn away your English readers.

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