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8h c33 dan.lew.upg
Can't wait for more
9/23 c33 Emyat
thanks for the update really apreciate that you still update this story I love this
9/22 c3 6EverFlawless
I think I will be sad when tobi is gone and we don't see him anymore. I think I might be depressed knowing that Naruto won't have his father figure anymore ...
9/22 c2 EverFlawless
so, tobi is like... the father he never had? I love this! next chapter WoooH
9/22 c1 EverFlawless
I love this prospect of an idea, it's so unique and well thought out. you have made a fan out of me with just the first chapter and I find that's hard to do. I tend to be picky about what I read when it comes to Naruto and I can't help but feel excited about what I see next with this story. I hope you know that I wish to give more Kudos than what I'm allotted, but I hope this first review I'm giving you gives the confidence you deserve to know that your story is well written! major love to you
9/16 c33 2TheSlySage
aaaaand caught up! so freaking awesome.

though Hiruzen reallllly should tell Naruto about his parents and clan now. He's a freaking Jounin now who definitely knows how to keep secrets lol he can handle knowing who his parents are. he could have handled it when he was a chunin lol

love this but would realllly like to see the unveiling.
9/15 c33 3Writing dreams into stories
bruh Konoha standard really dropped
9/14 c23 2TheSlySage
agreed cool sword... but sooo out of place in universe. btw binging this to catch up! I remember when you first posted this and got to the 4th chap then I took a ffn break and didn't see the updates. rediscovered this amazing work and have been eating it up since. thanks for writing !
9/14 c27 80YeagerMeister31
Well I have to say kinda sad chapter this Tsubaki dying but giving Naruto her Katana, I wonder what happens next also nice end to the chapter.
9/14 c32 Zaccai
I enjoyed this arc a lot, you did a really good job altering the sasori fight enough from the original to nake it interesting and the differences in the relationship with Gaara are very well done.
9/14 c26 YeagerMeister31
Well, that was cool NaruAnko kicked butt I wonder what happens next.
9/13 c25 YeagerMeister31
Well, this was musing kinda sad u deviated from canon would have been nice for Naruto to team up with Shino and Ino but oh well, nice jutsu also, can't wait for the next chapter.
9/12 c18 8nasapeepolover116
good thing historically you needed 5 to one odds to invade a fortified position and 4 to one in case of a sneak attack
9/12 c14 nasapeepolover116
WHY I wish I knew nothing about sword play reverse grip is absolutely useless unless it's a freaking knife so really short blades

yet it looks cool in movies I will say that
9/12 c9 nasapeepolover116
can I see him taking ass and kicking names instead
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