for Nidaime no Sairin9/22 c3 
6EverFlawless
I think I will be sad when tobi is gone and we don't see him anymore. I think I might be depressed knowing that Naruto won't have his father figure anymore ...
6EverFlawlessI think I will be sad when tobi is gone and we don't see him anymore. I think I might be depressed knowing that Naruto won't have his father figure anymore ...
9/22 c1 EverFlawless
I love this prospect of an idea, it's so unique and well thought out. you have made a fan out of me with just the first chapter and I find that's hard to do. I tend to be picky about what I read when it comes to Naruto and I can't help but feel excited about what I see next with this story. I hope you know that I wish to give more Kudos than what I'm allotted, but I hope this first review I'm giving you gives the confidence you deserve to know that your story is well written! major love to you
I love this prospect of an idea, it's so unique and well thought out. you have made a fan out of me with just the first chapter and I find that's hard to do. I tend to be picky about what I read when it comes to Naruto and I can't help but feel excited about what I see next with this story. I hope you know that I wish to give more Kudos than what I'm allotted, but I hope this first review I'm giving you gives the confidence you deserve to know that your story is well written! major love to you
9/16 c33 2TheSlySage
aaaaand caught up! so freaking awesome.
though Hiruzen reallllly should tell Naruto about his parents and clan now. He's a freaking Jounin now who definitely knows how to keep secrets lol he can handle knowing who his parents are. he could have handled it when he was a chunin lol
love this but would realllly like to see the unveiling.
2TheSlySageaaaaand caught up! so freaking awesome.
though Hiruzen reallllly should tell Naruto about his parents and clan now. He's a freaking Jounin now who definitely knows how to keep secrets lol he can handle knowing who his parents are. he could have handled it when he was a chunin lol
love this but would realllly like to see the unveiling.
9/14 c23 2TheSlySage
agreed cool sword... but sooo out of place in universe. btw binging this to catch up! I remember when you first posted this and got to the 4th chap then I took a ffn break and didn't see the updates. rediscovered this amazing work and have been eating it up since. thanks for writing !
2TheSlySageagreed cool sword... but sooo out of place in universe. btw binging this to catch up! I remember when you first posted this and got to the 4th chap then I took a ffn break and didn't see the updates. rediscovered this amazing work and have been eating it up since. thanks for writing !
9/14 c27 80YeagerMeister31
Well I have to say kinda sad chapter this Tsubaki dying but giving Naruto her Katana, I wonder what happens next also nice end to the chapter.
80YeagerMeister31Well I have to say kinda sad chapter this Tsubaki dying but giving Naruto her Katana, I wonder what happens next also nice end to the chapter.
9/14 c32 Zaccai
I enjoyed this arc a lot, you did a really good job altering the sasori fight enough from the original to nake it interesting and the differences in the relationship with Gaara are very well done.
I enjoyed this arc a lot, you did a really good job altering the sasori fight enough from the original to nake it interesting and the differences in the relationship with Gaara are very well done.
9/13 c25 YeagerMeister31
Well, this was musing kinda sad u deviated from canon would have been nice for Naruto to team up with Shino and Ino but oh well, nice jutsu also, can't wait for the next chapter.
Well, this was musing kinda sad u deviated from canon would have been nice for Naruto to team up with Shino and Ino but oh well, nice jutsu also, can't wait for the next chapter.
9/12 c18 8nasapeepolover116
good thing historically you needed 5 to one odds to invade a fortified position and 4 to one in case of a sneak attack
8nasapeepolover116good thing historically you needed 5 to one odds to invade a fortified position and 4 to one in case of a sneak attack
9/12 c14 nasapeepolover116
WHY I wish I knew nothing about sword play reverse grip is absolutely useless unless it's a freaking knife so really short blades
yet it looks cool in movies I will say that
WHY I wish I knew nothing about sword play reverse grip is absolutely useless unless it's a freaking knife so really short blades
yet it looks cool in movies I will say that