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11/21/2015 c3 Meltu
very good and well-written, please continue
7/31/2015 c3 2OP555
Can't wait for more
7/31/2015 c3 9newgenerarion
I liked i liked i love your history
to be continued your histori
is amaezing
Luna forever

Update soon!
7/15/2015 c1 Guest
Update please !
Luffy x nami forver
have lemmon?
7/14/2015 c2 Guest
wow you menaged to present luffy suffering perfectly just keep it up
fabulouse story
7/16/2015 c1 newgenerarion
Update soon! :) ;)
7/14/2015 c2 luffyxnami
The history will include LUNA ?
If there will Lemmon moon I would like to see the truth Lemmon between luffy and nami ;)
I'll wait the next chapter updates soon :)
7/14/2015 c2 lhya
I loved updated soon
7/14/2015 c2 luna
I love stories where ecenas LUNA appear : 3
deso not know what you read the next chapter updated soon
Please update soon : 3
7/14/2015 c1 samira
Luffy and Nami have to be together in this story that would be great
luffy x nami forever
Please update soon : 3
7/15/2015 c2 Killthebeast
I like the Story so far, always was a fan of teh Pairing between Luffy and Nami. And i'm quiete sure she could help him get better, faster or even better.

Would love to read more and see hwere the Story will be going.
7/14/2015 c2 newgenerarion
Nami Oooww charm appreciate me soon please update tomorrow or today if you can deverdad love your story and want to see more of it
update soon
9/28/2014 c1 nani-onigiri
I like your story :) you have a good way to write and i hope you write a next chapter and i would be happy if you write another story about luffy :) but i would like it if you dont write an au story i like canon storys more.
9/26/2014 c1 10JarOfIdeas
I think you have an error, the verbal-tic 'yoi' is only used by Marco the phoenix, And Law put 'ya' at the end of names like, ' Straw hatya '

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