
6/18/2020 c1
2Irina Hunter
If it isn't too late, I'd like to see canon pairings for the HP characters, and USUK from Hetalia. Also, I noticed a few minor errors, it's a good story so far.

If it isn't too late, I'd like to see canon pairings for the HP characters, and USUK from Hetalia. Also, I noticed a few minor errors, it's a good story so far.
2/23/2020 c9 Mokka
They wear dark clothes, so they must be dark wizards! - Harry Potter.
Harry, my boy, lmao. Your detective skills are top notch, almost unparalleled. I would feel bad for goths if they were to meet Harry, lol.
But good chapter! It's a shame that you probably won't continue this, considering it has been 5 years.
They wear dark clothes, so they must be dark wizards! - Harry Potter.
Harry, my boy, lmao. Your detective skills are top notch, almost unparalleled. I would feel bad for goths if they were to meet Harry, lol.
But good chapter! It's a shame that you probably won't continue this, considering it has been 5 years.
2/23/2020 c7 Guest
England can be really calm in canon. He acts like a tsundere towards America and France. Also Japan, but more "calm" tsundere, because Japan isn't as obnoxious as the other two. "D-don't get me wrong. I'm just doing this for myself, got it?/Well, if you so insist, I guess it can't be helped... " He says those kinda things relatively calmly to Japan. He doesn't yell really that much, only when he is with either America or France.
England can be really calm in canon. He acts like a tsundere towards America and France. Also Japan, but more "calm" tsundere, because Japan isn't as obnoxious as the other two. "D-don't get me wrong. I'm just doing this for myself, got it?/Well, if you so insist, I guess it can't be helped... " He says those kinda things relatively calmly to Japan. He doesn't yell really that much, only when he is with either America or France.
12/4/2018 c9 Eggheadded
My friend, you are the shit.
The best shit.
dear fukin god, I can't beleive this beautiful peice of writing
please, please continue!
My friend, you are the shit.
The best shit.
dear fukin god, I can't beleive this beautiful peice of writing
please, please continue!
9/27/2018 c2 Guest
Dude, it's where with a h, no were.
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Dude, it's where with a h, no were.
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10/10/2017 c9 Guest
*hugs knees in corner while staring at phone, rocking back and forth while waiting for the next chapter to come*
*hugs knees in corner while staring at phone, rocking back and forth while waiting for the next chapter to come*
7/30/2017 c7 WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
"Whatever, it's tea time."
I LIKE YOUR THINKING!
"Whatever, it's tea time."
I LIKE YOUR THINKING!
7/30/2017 c1 WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
WE'RE OFF TO SEE THE WIZAARD! OH, THE WONDERFUL WIZARD OF OZ!
WE'RE OFF TO SEE THE WIZAARD! OH, THE WONDERFUL WIZARD OF OZ!
7/11/2017 c9 Miinarosie
I love this fanfic so much3 it's one of my favourites:D and this would make an awsome movie,"0", I hope that you continue this story because I'm addicted to this(/"")/
Miinarosie
P.s Greetings from Finland:b
I love this fanfic so much3 it's one of my favourites:D and this would make an awsome movie,"0", I hope that you continue this story because I'm addicted to this(/"")/
Miinarosie
P.s Greetings from Finland:b
2/21/2017 c9 weirdonamedbrie
This is a really good story and I can't wait for you to update so I can see how it will grow and progress!
This is a really good story and I can't wait for you to update so I can see how it will grow and progress!
9/3/2016 c9 lilyfowlpotter
Wow! I know this story hasn't been updated for, like, a year; nevertheless, I can't help to comment in it. It seriously suprised and delighted me. Finding good stories, with proper grammar, good plots, characters without OOC syndrome, AND good writing is really hard to do! But, honestly, you have astounded me, I personally really liked the way you described characters, their antics and quirks were magnificiently represented, while also having good dialogues that had just the right amount of humor and sometimes just the slightest romance. (I'll admit I was fangirling in USUK scenes...) The way you narrated seemed to take me out of my boring world (where should I be studying...) and transported me to England (quite literally) and his adventures while coughing blood! Plus your Hermione and Ron interactions were hilarious and just in place. I would really appreciate if you explained in future chapters (if there will be) the deal of Luna being a seer? I found that quite original, and interesting! Please do continue with this, since it would be a shame not being able to follow how this story moves and develops! :3
(Sorry for any grammar, or spelling mistakes. English is not my native tongue.)
Wow! I know this story hasn't been updated for, like, a year; nevertheless, I can't help to comment in it. It seriously suprised and delighted me. Finding good stories, with proper grammar, good plots, characters without OOC syndrome, AND good writing is really hard to do! But, honestly, you have astounded me, I personally really liked the way you described characters, their antics and quirks were magnificiently represented, while also having good dialogues that had just the right amount of humor and sometimes just the slightest romance. (I'll admit I was fangirling in USUK scenes...) The way you narrated seemed to take me out of my boring world (where should I be studying...) and transported me to England (quite literally) and his adventures while coughing blood! Plus your Hermione and Ron interactions were hilarious and just in place. I would really appreciate if you explained in future chapters (if there will be) the deal of Luna being a seer? I found that quite original, and interesting! Please do continue with this, since it would be a shame not being able to follow how this story moves and develops! :3
(Sorry for any grammar, or spelling mistakes. English is not my native tongue.)