
6/15/2019 c10 AMRS90
I'm so glad you saved Aaron! Another great chapter. I'm happy he has come to his senses too. I hope we'll see him and Marta starting to get serious and open about each other. I also liked that you gave us Nikki's POV. And seeing how she noticed something there a couple chapters back. I thought I'd only like Aaron and MARTA's POV view, but I actually liked having hers. Keep up the good work!
I'm so glad you saved Aaron! Another great chapter. I'm happy he has come to his senses too. I hope we'll see him and Marta starting to get serious and open about each other. I also liked that you gave us Nikki's POV. And seeing how she noticed something there a couple chapters back. I thought I'd only like Aaron and MARTA's POV view, but I actually liked having hers. Keep up the good work!
6/14/2019 c3 AMRS90
I really like what you have so far! I enjoy reading the story from Aaron's POV. Can't wait to see where you take it! I have no idea when but I how they do meet up/team up with Jason
I really like what you have so far! I enjoy reading the story from Aaron's POV. Can't wait to see where you take it! I have no idea when but I how they do meet up/team up with Jason
6/14/2019 c1 AMRS90
I like it! I like that you started with Marta's POV during the chase scene. Great start!
I like it! I like that you started with Marta's POV during the chase scene. Great start!
7/31/2017 c5 iHateHotWeather123
The PROBLEM with this story is that YOU'RE TOO FOCUSED/BIAS towards this lame-ass Cross/m,arta characters/fandom INSTEAD of actually the Bourne series/movies..Why the hell would I care about this chaeap ass 'bourne' substitutes when what I WANT to READ IS Bourne/Nicky! That is one of the reasons why you've got SHIT for reviews/readers..All I did breeze through the chapters to see JUST WHEN BOURNE and NICKY appearing and so far, nothing! I didn't even read the chapters..PASS!
The PROBLEM with this story is that YOU'RE TOO FOCUSED/BIAS towards this lame-ass Cross/m,arta characters/fandom INSTEAD of actually the Bourne series/movies..Why the hell would I care about this chaeap ass 'bourne' substitutes when what I WANT to READ IS Bourne/Nicky! That is one of the reasons why you've got SHIT for reviews/readers..All I did breeze through the chapters to see JUST WHEN BOURNE and NICKY appearing and so far, nothing! I didn't even read the chapters..PASS!
5/11/2017 c1 Guest
Me encanta, en serio. Amo las películas de Bourne y cuando vi El Legado de Bourne con Jeremy Renner como prota, juro por Dios que morí de felicidad. Y ahora leer esta historia...por el Ángel, la amo. Me has elegrado el día, de verdad. En la peli quise ver Aaron X Marta pero que va, aunque se les notaba la Química entre ello. Eres genial.
Me encanta, en serio. Amo las películas de Bourne y cuando vi El Legado de Bourne con Jeremy Renner como prota, juro por Dios que morí de felicidad. Y ahora leer esta historia...por el Ángel, la amo. Me has elegrado el día, de verdad. En la peli quise ver Aaron X Marta pero que va, aunque se les notaba la Química entre ello. Eres genial.
12/18/2016 c19 Maddy
aaahhhh this was amazing I loved it so much!
aaahhhh this was amazing I loved it so much!
11/8/2016 c21 Moonraven81
This story was awesome! I love Aaron and Jason. Cant wait to read the sequel!
This story was awesome! I love Aaron and Jason. Cant wait to read the sequel!