
11/8/2023 c48 UnsanMusho
That was a great match between Sasuke and Lee. Can't wait for the next match.
That was a great match between Sasuke and Lee. Can't wait for the next match.
11/8/2023 c48 lbrinkley01
Nice chapter so i guess we can expect the next one next year hell at this pace we might get to shippuden by 2065
Nice chapter so i guess we can expect the next one next year hell at this pace we might get to shippuden by 2065
11/8/2023 c48 Limerick90
That fight was FIRE! Pun intended yet so fitting.
The back and forth was great and both Lee and Sasuke got to shine, with the restriction on the Gates Lee was allowed to open explaining the outcome nicely. Sasuke showed some amazing growth not only in his Jutsu arsenal and Lee's new weapon was a great addition.
Also, Hiruzen trolling Orochimaru got better and better with every instance.
Thanks for the chapter! :D
That fight was FIRE! Pun intended yet so fitting.
The back and forth was great and both Lee and Sasuke got to shine, with the restriction on the Gates Lee was allowed to open explaining the outcome nicely. Sasuke showed some amazing growth not only in his Jutsu arsenal and Lee's new weapon was a great addition.
Also, Hiruzen trolling Orochimaru got better and better with every instance.
Thanks for the chapter! :D
11/8/2023 c48 frankieu
nice chapter thx for writing it
fun fight with lee and sasuke good thing for his health the rival remains neij :D
nice chapter thx for writing it
fun fight with lee and sasuke good thing for his health the rival remains neij :D
11/7/2023 c47 AdrianVnz
Damn, i can't wait until Game of Life reaches this point too, and at least this and that will get 1 more chapter this year, xD.
Damn, i can't wait until Game of Life reaches this point too, and at least this and that will get 1 more chapter this year, xD.
10/13/2023 c47 Boku dayo Monkunai desho
One of the best fanfics I ever read, please keepnon with the great work.
One of the best fanfics I ever read, please keepnon with the great work.
10/1/2023 c23
2WeavingThat
This is good, but it has serious problems with unnecessary exposition and Marie Sue. Not in the sense that Naruko is very strong, but that everything and everyone is constantly talking about her. All the time. The only thing worse than that is how constantly they talk about their past, how hard it was, and how good the Uzumaki are. They are constantly kissing his feet, after the fifth time of hearing how good they were and how much they have done already you even hate them. There is not a chapter where reference is not made to the Uzumaki and how good they are in one way or another, stop. The fights are also exaggeratedly long and everyone talks too much, giving information about everything and everyone constantly. In that aspect it is too similar to the original series for the worse. It's very hard to read sometimes.

This is good, but it has serious problems with unnecessary exposition and Marie Sue. Not in the sense that Naruko is very strong, but that everything and everyone is constantly talking about her. All the time. The only thing worse than that is how constantly they talk about their past, how hard it was, and how good the Uzumaki are. They are constantly kissing his feet, after the fifth time of hearing how good they were and how much they have done already you even hate them. There is not a chapter where reference is not made to the Uzumaki and how good they are in one way or another, stop. The fights are also exaggeratedly long and everyone talks too much, giving information about everything and everyone constantly. In that aspect it is too similar to the original series for the worse. It's very hard to read sometimes.
9/24/2023 c47
13N7 Greek-Valkyrie
Woohoo! I love this story so far. I can't wait to see who all ends up in her Harem. Hehe. (Princess from the Land of Snow?) Keep up the awesome work!

Woohoo! I love this story so far. I can't wait to see who all ends up in her Harem. Hehe. (Princess from the Land of Snow?) Keep up the awesome work!
8/20/2023 c47 Chris Driscoll
Just did another reread of this such a good story. I look forward to more. Any idea when your next chapter may be up
Just did another reread of this such a good story. I look forward to more. Any idea when your next chapter may be up
7/31/2023 c3 Kawaki1
Average Uzu seal Master is better than Minato when it comes to Fuinjutsu Combat,
Average Uzu seal Master is better than Minato when it comes to Fuinjutsu Combat,
7/31/2023 c2 Kawaki1
Minato didn't help Uzu in fight he was a kid at that time.
Average Uzu Shinobi with seal mastery Minato
It took many nations to defeat Uzu not just Iwa, Kiri and Kumo.
Minato didn't help Uzu in fight he was a kid at that time.
Average Uzu Shinobi with seal mastery Minato
It took many nations to defeat Uzu not just Iwa, Kiri and Kumo.
7/31/2023 c1 Kawaki1
Their are lot of information missing. And misinformations. Like, Kushina was the one who taught Minato Sealing Jutsu, if not for her, Minato would be another Jounin but still will be a Prodigy but not as strong as canon.
And Uzumakis specialty is their sealing art, their high and dense Chakra, and their Longevity. They were called the village of longevity.
Uzushiogakure existed even before Hashirama was Born. They were the one who funded Konoha.
And Uzu was destroyed in 2nd grate Ninja war not 3rd. It happened when Kushina was 10 to 11. Few days after her arrival in Konoha.
Their are lot of information missing. And misinformations. Like, Kushina was the one who taught Minato Sealing Jutsu, if not for her, Minato would be another Jounin but still will be a Prodigy but not as strong as canon.
And Uzumakis specialty is their sealing art, their high and dense Chakra, and their Longevity. They were called the village of longevity.
Uzushiogakure existed even before Hashirama was Born. They were the one who funded Konoha.
And Uzu was destroyed in 2nd grate Ninja war not 3rd. It happened when Kushina was 10 to 11. Few days after her arrival in Konoha.