
4/23/2023 c47
2Memoria Vita
YAY! An update and Hinata kicked his ass! woot woot! seriously though, Neji at this point in his life has such a major tree up his ass... And honestly, it makes sense to have a soft and hard style of juuken. tradition for traditions sake is foolish in the extreme. I so want to see how the next fights hold for us and what you have done with them. Keep up the wonderful work and take care of yourself! selfcare first and all. :p

YAY! An update and Hinata kicked his ass! woot woot! seriously though, Neji at this point in his life has such a major tree up his ass... And honestly, it makes sense to have a soft and hard style of juuken. tradition for traditions sake is foolish in the extreme. I so want to see how the next fights hold for us and what you have done with them. Keep up the wonderful work and take care of yourself! selfcare first and all. :p
4/20/2023 c47 Guest
After they remove whatever seal Danzo implanted inside Naruko’s womb (will we ever get to find out WHEN Sanzo did this and WHAT his rationale was for preventing the return of the Uzumaki Clan), how does Naruto intend to become pregnant when she is a Lesbian? Is there some kind of Futanari Jutsu, or Fuinjutsu that the Uzumaki Clan created? And will Danzo try to enter into an Alliance with those Evil Fuinjutsu using Clans (I can’t remember if you have stated that those clans supplied the Fuinjutsu that contributed to the destruction of the Land of Whirlpools)? Hopefully the compound in Siege Mode will prevent ROOT from stealing anything and allow Hiruzen (if he survives, or Jiraiya and Tsunade) to NAIL Danzo with attempt to steal Clan Secrets for his own selfish gain!
After they remove whatever seal Danzo implanted inside Naruko’s womb (will we ever get to find out WHEN Sanzo did this and WHAT his rationale was for preventing the return of the Uzumaki Clan), how does Naruto intend to become pregnant when she is a Lesbian? Is there some kind of Futanari Jutsu, or Fuinjutsu that the Uzumaki Clan created? And will Danzo try to enter into an Alliance with those Evil Fuinjutsu using Clans (I can’t remember if you have stated that those clans supplied the Fuinjutsu that contributed to the destruction of the Land of Whirlpools)? Hopefully the compound in Siege Mode will prevent ROOT from stealing anything and allow Hiruzen (if he survives, or Jiraiya and Tsunade) to NAIL Danzo with attempt to steal Clan Secrets for his own selfish gain!
4/22/2023 c47 ElementalMaster16
A very exciting chapter! I loved the battle of the hyuuga, Hinata was amazing.
A very exciting chapter! I loved the battle of the hyuuga, Hinata was amazing.
4/21/2023 c10 wulfseeker1
hey just so you know I did some math and according to your schedule it will take you 24 years to write 50 chapters of your stories and considering your stories I doubt most of them will be done in 50 chapters
hey just so you know I did some math and according to your schedule it will take you 24 years to write 50 chapters of your stories and considering your stories I doubt most of them will be done in 50 chapters
4/21/2023 c47
15Leaf Ranger
Holy crap. Hinata won? Awesome! Way to go Hinata!
That was a heck of an awesome fight between Neji and Hinata, very well done. I had a lot of fun writing mine, though the fight was a lot closer in that, due to Hinata's circumstances.
anyways, great work, keep it up! Glad to see you back.

Holy crap. Hinata won? Awesome! Way to go Hinata!
That was a heck of an awesome fight between Neji and Hinata, very well done. I had a lot of fun writing mine, though the fight was a lot closer in that, due to Hinata's circumstances.
anyways, great work, keep it up! Glad to see you back.
4/20/2023 c2
1The Dark Sapphire
Nahhh, why did you ruin the teams? Ino-shika-cho is like the biggest legacy team in Konoha. You also made the civilian council cliche bad guys like half the other naruto fanfics.

Nahhh, why did you ruin the teams? Ino-shika-cho is like the biggest legacy team in Konoha. You also made the civilian council cliche bad guys like half the other naruto fanfics.
4/20/2023 c1 The Dark Sapphire
Cool gauntlets. Hiruzen is a lot smarter here too. Also, it was multi shadow clone technique that was kinjutsu, not normal ones.
Cool gauntlets. Hiruzen is a lot smarter here too. Also, it was multi shadow clone technique that was kinjutsu, not normal ones.
4/19/2023 c47
14Power of Magic
That was quite a cool chapter, and I look forward to how you'll do the next one. The fight was awesome, and I think it's fitting that Hinata beat Neji, as she was able to prove to him that she isn't a failure. Here's hoping that the next match will be just as good

That was quite a cool chapter, and I look forward to how you'll do the next one. The fight was awesome, and I think it's fitting that Hinata beat Neji, as she was able to prove to him that she isn't a failure. Here's hoping that the next match will be just as good
4/19/2023 c47 Limerick90
Nice, Shippuden outfits are here. Also, new hairstyle for Sakura!
That was an interesting clash, I like the Shugohakke and how it works. Seems like it would work well with Wind too. The Taijutsu clash between the two also shows how important it was for Hinata to prove her capabilities in that regard, since she's had plenty of training in other aspects of being a ninja, so she could've definitely tried to use other things alongside her poking fingers if she wanted to. A satisfying resolution! Though the aftermath will be interesting too.
I love the little development story behind the Tenketsu-opening technique that got expanded here. :D
Also, Hiruzen seeing through Orochimaru like this is hilarious. Very entertaining! xD
Nice, Shippuden outfits are here. Also, new hairstyle for Sakura!
That was an interesting clash, I like the Shugohakke and how it works. Seems like it would work well with Wind too. The Taijutsu clash between the two also shows how important it was for Hinata to prove her capabilities in that regard, since she's had plenty of training in other aspects of being a ninja, so she could've definitely tried to use other things alongside her poking fingers if she wanted to. A satisfying resolution! Though the aftermath will be interesting too.
I love the little development story behind the Tenketsu-opening technique that got expanded here. :D
Also, Hiruzen seeing through Orochimaru like this is hilarious. Very entertaining! xD