for Uzumaki Naruko: To the Victor, the Spoils V22/20/2024 c3 Jake the Snake
Looking forward to see Kurenai's team dealing with the invaders.
Looking forward to see Kurenai's team dealing with the invaders.
2/21/2024 c23 Kairan1979
Glad to see Naruko succeeded to bond her sword to her, and, with Kushina's help, developed her Adamantium chains.
Glad to see Naruko succeeded to bond her sword to her, and, with Kushina's help, developed her Adamantium chains.
1/22/2024 c48 
1jerryagresor
I just realized something. If we take into account that Naruko's henge is physical, couldn't she make herself a penis? and, you know, when the time comes, you know what
1jerryagresorI just realized something. If we take into account that Naruko's henge is physical, couldn't she make herself a penis? and, you know, when the time comes, you know what
1/19/2024 c17 Robotdocter
what in the hell is wrong with Kurenai? i get she's the team leader but jesus christ she acts like she's in charge of absolutely everything and if she doesnt like what others are doing she thinks its right to punish them or tell them off.
other than that which ive been so annoyed and confused about for the last several chapters, finally killed that damn tree XD
cant wait to see the aftermath and whats next, i think i know what the next arc is and im excited :o
what in the hell is wrong with Kurenai? i get she's the team leader but jesus christ she acts like she's in charge of absolutely everything and if she doesnt like what others are doing she thinks its right to punish them or tell them off.
other than that which ive been so annoyed and confused about for the last several chapters, finally killed that damn tree XD
cant wait to see the aftermath and whats next, i think i know what the next arc is and im excited :o
1/18/2024 c11 Robotdocter
two things,
1: why would sakura think after basically mentally torturing someone would she be in any way justified in then assaulting said person after she woke back up after being taken out of the fight? that makes literally no sense.
2: why is Sasuke not immediately disqualified for the attack that everyone saw was intended to be lethal, with the Kage himself and several jonin watching on the side there to witness it?
i dont care about whether or not people think she's a Mary Sue btw, im not abhorrent to the idea of an op character in fanfiction, thats the point of fanfiction lol.
two things,
1: why would sakura think after basically mentally torturing someone would she be in any way justified in then assaulting said person after she woke back up after being taken out of the fight? that makes literally no sense.
2: why is Sasuke not immediately disqualified for the attack that everyone saw was intended to be lethal, with the Kage himself and several jonin watching on the side there to witness it?
i dont care about whether or not people think she's a Mary Sue btw, im not abhorrent to the idea of an op character in fanfiction, thats the point of fanfiction lol.
1/12/2024 c48 9Dragon Man 180
Very nice fight between Lee and Sasuke, both were awesome and got to show off a bit! I loved Lee's use of the staff and Sasuke's variety of jutsu!
9Dragon Man 180Very nice fight between Lee and Sasuke, both were awesome and got to show off a bit! I loved Lee's use of the staff and Sasuke's variety of jutsu!
11/25/2023 c1 6Irish Shift
I love this story and really wish I could download it to listen at work would ou ever consider possible posting this over on Ao3?
6Irish ShiftI love this story and really wish I could download it to listen at work would ou ever consider possible posting this over on Ao3?
11/23/2023 c21 Rios
Question of proginy
If yuri only, will they discover a "grow male equipment temporarily jutsu" or are you gonna go a rout similar to the rwby fic linked in life and love.
Definitely read that too, great story with good romance
Question of proginy
If yuri only, will they discover a "grow male equipment temporarily jutsu" or are you gonna go a rout similar to the rwby fic linked in life and love.
Definitely read that too, great story with good romance
11/24/2023 c48 4Raineh Daze
Being a genius of hard work doesn't work if you won't engage your brain and make that work as well, huh?
Overall, I've been enjoying this, that one weird niggle aside, and I'm definitely impressed by how long you've been working at it. Will be interesting to see how the rest of the Chuunin exams pans out, and how things will change once Akatsuki gets involved.
4Raineh DazeBeing a genius of hard work doesn't work if you won't engage your brain and make that work as well, huh?
Overall, I've been enjoying this, that one weird niggle aside, and I'm definitely impressed by how long you've been working at it. Will be interesting to see how the rest of the Chuunin exams pans out, and how things will change once Akatsuki gets involved.
11/24/2023 c47 Raineh Daze
Good for Hinata. Surprised she didn't use a bit more ninjutsu, but I guess there's still some of that Hyuuga taijutsu pride going around.
Good for Hinata. Surprised she didn't use a bit more ninjutsu, but I guess there's still some of that Hyuuga taijutsu pride going around.
11/23/2023 c39 Raineh Daze
Kind of weird that every lesbian so far has had to have some justification for not being interested in men. That's got some pretty unfortunate connotations, tbh.
Kind of weird that every lesbian so far has had to have some justification for not being interested in men. That's got some pretty unfortunate connotations, tbh.