for The Little Merman8/16/2016 c1 Guest
Love this!
Love this!
9/29/2014 c1 
2alanasibertelli
:D very funny but the sad part is that the story is so short!
Please keep writing more stories!
2alanasibertelli:D very funny but the sad part is that the story is so short!
Please keep writing more stories!
9/29/2014 c1 234tinylexie
I just loved the banter between Lucius and Severus. My favorite parts were Lucius lamenting Severus's lack of subtlety (is Lucius honestly the only Slytherin that understands and values subtlety?), and Severus wanting to back out of the whole thing when Lucius said he was cursing him. Only Severus would trust Lucius with anything, LOL. I also loved how Lucius tried to act so innocent in the end. I just was laughing throughout all of Lucius's and Severus's conversation; they are so funny together. Good job with this.
234tinylexieI just loved the banter between Lucius and Severus. My favorite parts were Lucius lamenting Severus's lack of subtlety (is Lucius honestly the only Slytherin that understands and values subtlety?), and Severus wanting to back out of the whole thing when Lucius said he was cursing him. Only Severus would trust Lucius with anything, LOL. I also loved how Lucius tried to act so innocent in the end. I just was laughing throughout all of Lucius's and Severus's conversation; they are so funny together. Good job with this.