for Code Geass: The Prepared Rebellion V25/18 c58 Guest
Hi, I'm writing this with the translator, but I'd like to know if you're going to continue this fic. It's the best Code Geass fic I've ever read, and I'd love for you to continue it soon.
Hi, I'm writing this with the translator, but I'd like to know if you're going to continue this fic. It's the best Code Geass fic I've ever read, and I'd love for you to continue it soon.
4/26 c58 Isaac Moura
I imagine the transition from one book to the other being a little like the end of Bourne a explosion everyone thinking Zero die then sometime later another Zero is born then suddenly the scene come back to the time of the explosion with Lelouch showing that he survived so he comeback sometime later.
I imagine the transition from one book to the other being a little like the end of Bourne a explosion everyone thinking Zero die then sometime later another Zero is born then suddenly the scene come back to the time of the explosion with Lelouch showing that he survived so he comeback sometime later.
4/7 c9 Anee-1
Yeah, carrying on from my previous review, I don't think I'm going to continue reading, I gave up halfway through this chapter. Having to read Lelouch explain everything I literally read happen, again, to someone else, in detail... That's a severe issue, and that has really just been the entire fic at this point, you over explaining everything in direct dialogue, the slowest form of communication in a story. It's a shame, I might skip forward to the newest chapter just to see if your writing has improved drastically, if it has, I can't recommend editing and rewiring the earlier chapters more.
Yeah, carrying on from my previous review, I don't think I'm going to continue reading, I gave up halfway through this chapter. Having to read Lelouch explain everything I literally read happen, again, to someone else, in detail... That's a severe issue, and that has really just been the entire fic at this point, you over explaining everything in direct dialogue, the slowest form of communication in a story. It's a shame, I might skip forward to the newest chapter just to see if your writing has improved drastically, if it has, I can't recommend editing and rewiring the earlier chapters more.
4/7 c8 Anee-1
Reading this, and seeing how you've written so much more, I wonder how you would edit these earlier chapters now? There's too much unnecessary expostionary dialogue, it comes off as unnatural, I'm sure the more I read, the more you will improve, but it's a little off putting as it is.
Reading this, and seeing how you've written so much more, I wonder how you would edit these earlier chapters now? There's too much unnecessary expostionary dialogue, it comes off as unnatural, I'm sure the more I read, the more you will improve, but it's a little off putting as it is.