for Return The Dark Slayer5/31/2015 c24 Lord Asmodeus
Initially I was not going to comment. However, I simply have to say this...this was absolutely adorable. They were perfect for each other.
Although I do have few qualms, such as Elsa in the early chapters openly informing her 'friends' of Vergil's life. That is an act of betrayal. Vergil trusted her, yet she simply blabbered to her so called friends.
And then there is Vergil himself, at times I felt there was discrepancies in his characterisation. Especially after he became 'soft', it simply did not feel right. I find it be rather adorable, how devoted he is to Elsa, but his attitude to the others is becoming annoying. Vergil would never let anyone mock or humiliate him ever! Yet he allows Anna and the other stupid princesses to do Just that. And also, I have say, your Anna was one of the most irritating creatures in existence. I simply wanted Vergil to kill her. But anyway, this story was about Vergil and Elsa, which is why I read this is in first place, so it's still good.
Initially I was not going to comment. However, I simply have to say this...this was absolutely adorable. They were perfect for each other.
Although I do have few qualms, such as Elsa in the early chapters openly informing her 'friends' of Vergil's life. That is an act of betrayal. Vergil trusted her, yet she simply blabbered to her so called friends.
And then there is Vergil himself, at times I felt there was discrepancies in his characterisation. Especially after he became 'soft', it simply did not feel right. I find it be rather adorable, how devoted he is to Elsa, but his attitude to the others is becoming annoying. Vergil would never let anyone mock or humiliate him ever! Yet he allows Anna and the other stupid princesses to do Just that. And also, I have say, your Anna was one of the most irritating creatures in existence. I simply wanted Vergil to kill her. But anyway, this story was about Vergil and Elsa, which is why I read this is in first place, so it's still good.
5/15/2015 c1 Guest
when you gonna update this story?
when you gonna update this story?
4/25/2015 c24 
5Gamernerd6
I absolutely love this story, you rock. I hope you update soon, and I hope you add Dante in the near future. I'm also wondering what Hans and the southern isle are gonna do about Vergil, not that they can do much but you know what I mean? Keep it up.
5Gamernerd6I absolutely love this story, you rock. I hope you update soon, and I hope you add Dante in the near future. I'm also wondering what Hans and the southern isle are gonna do about Vergil, not that they can do much but you know what I mean? Keep it up.
4/24/2015 c4 Ripper Mundus
Oh man... i've laugh hard in this chapter... i've split coockies all over my desk, HAHAHAHAAHAH you are cleaning this!
Oh man... i've laugh hard in this chapter... i've split coockies all over my desk, HAHAHAHAAHAH you are cleaning this!
4/22/2015 c3 Ripper Mundus
Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm... really interesting... i really like this fic, it's a nice fucking fic!
Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm... really interesting... i really like this fic, it's a nice fucking fic!
4/12/2015 c24 25The Baz
What I wouldn't give to see Dante crash the wedding. The priest would be like 'if anyone has a reason why these two should not be wed' then Dante would kick open the chapel door and be like 'I got a few reasons'. That's my dream.
25The BazWhat I wouldn't give to see Dante crash the wedding. The priest would be like 'if anyone has a reason why these two should not be wed' then Dante would kick open the chapel door and be like 'I got a few reasons'. That's my dream.
3/28/2015 c23 Guest
Beautiful story, I can't wait for the next chapter. (10/10)
Beautiful story, I can't wait for the next chapter. (10/10)
3/6/2015 c19 SilverstormXD
WHY IS THIS NOT POPULAR...FUCK YOU BIASED OPINION IF PEOPLE WHO WANT DANTE AND MORE ACTIONY SHIT
WHY IS THIS NOT POPULAR...FUCK YOU BIASED OPINION IF PEOPLE WHO WANT DANTE AND MORE ACTIONY SHIT
2/14/2015 c23 Greyjedi449t
Okay, so far I really love your story and what you have created. It definitely needs more reviews and favs. I'll definitely continue reading it when it is updated.
The problem I have with your story so far, and this is merely my own opinion, is that you don't give Vergil so much action and have more focus on the romance, which is by no means bad at all. I just hoped for a little more adventure and a little more danger and Vergil kicking ass while at the same time building up Vergils and Elsas relationship.
For example, when Vergil went to get more power at the beginning, you stated in the previous chapters that he would be gone from Elsa and the others for 2 months at maximum doing this thing, but nope, It takes him a week only. There was so much potential and opportunity there that you could have used for Vergil to get more power at the end.
Don't worry I do like how he gets it, but it is just too damn easy for him and I feel that he as a character in love doesn't evolve that much.
So I will give your story a 8.5 out of 10
But hey, that is my only gripe with the story, all the other things is very good and I am a sucker for romance stories. So I'll be looking forward to the next chapter and hope you update it soon :)
Okay, so far I really love your story and what you have created. It definitely needs more reviews and favs. I'll definitely continue reading it when it is updated.
The problem I have with your story so far, and this is merely my own opinion, is that you don't give Vergil so much action and have more focus on the romance, which is by no means bad at all. I just hoped for a little more adventure and a little more danger and Vergil kicking ass while at the same time building up Vergils and Elsas relationship.
For example, when Vergil went to get more power at the beginning, you stated in the previous chapters that he would be gone from Elsa and the others for 2 months at maximum doing this thing, but nope, It takes him a week only. There was so much potential and opportunity there that you could have used for Vergil to get more power at the end.
Don't worry I do like how he gets it, but it is just too damn easy for him and I feel that he as a character in love doesn't evolve that much.
So I will give your story a 8.5 out of 10
But hey, that is my only gripe with the story, all the other things is very good and I am a sucker for romance stories. So I'll be looking forward to the next chapter and hope you update it soon :)