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20Hiruma Musouka
I have to say, you're completely spoiling me with these daily updates (not that that's a complaint!).
I really love the historical details that you sneak in as background, e.g. the portraits and Slytherin in relation to the timeline. It really works wonders in making the Wizarding World seem like a genuine culture.
And Dorea wearing the curse-catchers which look like feathers make me wonder now if any of Luna's typically odd adornments could have a purpose (she's one of my favorite canon characters :D).
And I like the extra classes that you've made available here. It really helps Hogwarts seem more like a higher quality school because when I compare the number of electives in canon versus what I went to high school with (and I went to public school) we had a lot more. I think I would be concerned for my child's education at canon Hogwarts frankly, but I really like your version so far. Although it's a social disgrace that they have to have 'underground' classes to avoid the Headmaster interfering. That should be rectified at some point hopefully! (My inner academic does NOT like Dumbledore's influence.)
And I love the interactions between Dorea and the Twins. Can't say why specifically yet, but I definitely like it.
And I like the discussions on Family magic and how none of the characters have the exact same skills or abilities, especially Sirius. It's more... realistic.
And Dorea's desire for a tall husband is charmingly adorable.
20Hiruma MusoukaI have to say, you're completely spoiling me with these daily updates (not that that's a complaint!).
I really love the historical details that you sneak in as background, e.g. the portraits and Slytherin in relation to the timeline. It really works wonders in making the Wizarding World seem like a genuine culture.
And Dorea wearing the curse-catchers which look like feathers make me wonder now if any of Luna's typically odd adornments could have a purpose (she's one of my favorite canon characters :D).
And I like the extra classes that you've made available here. It really helps Hogwarts seem more like a higher quality school because when I compare the number of electives in canon versus what I went to high school with (and I went to public school) we had a lot more. I think I would be concerned for my child's education at canon Hogwarts frankly, but I really like your version so far. Although it's a social disgrace that they have to have 'underground' classes to avoid the Headmaster interfering. That should be rectified at some point hopefully! (My inner academic does NOT like Dumbledore's influence.)
And I love the interactions between Dorea and the Twins. Can't say why specifically yet, but I definitely like it.
And I like the discussions on Family magic and how none of the characters have the exact same skills or abilities, especially Sirius. It's more... realistic.
And Dorea's desire for a tall husband is charmingly adorable.
10/18/2014 c19 24InsaneScriptist
First year ends and there are hidden talking snakes everywhere in Hogwarts.
24InsaneScriptistFirst year ends and there are hidden talking snakes everywhere in Hogwarts.
10/18/2014 c18 Aloever
I love the details you put into everything. The extra background and explanations, why this or that is done. It is really satisfying to read about. I like that your stories have this and it stops them from being jumpy like some stories are and makes it seem like not everything you read about is written just to get to a specific point in the story. What I mean is the world building is really good. :)
I love the details you put into everything. The extra background and explanations, why this or that is done. It is really satisfying to read about. I like that your stories have this and it stops them from being jumpy like some stories are and makes it seem like not everything you read about is written just to get to a specific point in the story. What I mean is the world building is really good. :)
10/17/2014 c18 DarkRavie
Great chapter. Your story is really good and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.
Great chapter. Your story is really good and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.
10/17/2014 c18 4Greatazuredragon
Hehe Voldy was fried and Dora has no idea. Very good story, will be looking forward to the next update, good work.
4GreatazuredragonHehe Voldy was fried and Dora has no idea. Very good story, will be looking forward to the next update, good work.
10/17/2014 c18 Roningirlkisa
Large-scale chaos like getting involved with the worlds strongest mafia famiglia kind or bringing home a boyfriend who also happens to be either a boss or hitman kind of large-scale chaos? Lol :)
Large-scale chaos like getting involved with the worlds strongest mafia famiglia kind or bringing home a boyfriend who also happens to be either a boss or hitman kind of large-scale chaos? Lol :)
10/17/2014 c12 Greatazuredragon
You know, I find myself disproportionately liking your killer owls idea, something about that just make me smile. ;p
Very good story so far, well done.
You know, I find myself disproportionately liking your killer owls idea, something about that just make me smile. ;p
Very good story so far, well done.
10/17/2014 c9 Greatazuredragon
This is a very good story. I like the personality you are crafting for Dorea, nice work.
This is a very good story. I like the personality you are crafting for Dorea, nice work.
10/17/2014 c18 1Molly Grace 16
Good chapter. I'm glad to see Hedwig made it into the story. I noticed this story is listed as a crossover. When will that be coming into play?
1Molly Grace 16Good chapter. I'm glad to see Hedwig made it into the story. I noticed this story is listed as a crossover. When will that be coming into play?
10/17/2014 c18 24InsaneScriptist
The winter hols are done after much shopping, enjoyment and crazy relatives.
Poor Dorea though, her hair gets *more* curly when happy.
24InsaneScriptistThe winter hols are done after much shopping, enjoyment and crazy relatives.
Poor Dorea though, her hair gets *more* curly when happy.
10/17/2014 c18 monstar315
It would be amazing if she ended up as some kind of curse breaker/potion master when shes older
It would be amazing if she ended up as some kind of curse breaker/potion master when shes older
10/17/2014 c18 belle hawk
Thanks God you are updating daily-which I love you for- otherwise I wouldn't be able to wait for the next chapter. You are doing a very good job here. You give enough details and background knowledge that they don't bore the readers or leave them up the good work :))
Thanks God you are updating daily-which I love you for- otherwise I wouldn't be able to wait for the next chapter. You are doing a very good job here. You give enough details and background knowledge that they don't bore the readers or leave them up the good work :))