
10/1/2014 c1
5Love-is-Cyanide
I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with this plot base .
Judging from the title, Dorea/Rose is going to be a Sky Guardian?

I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with this plot base .
Judging from the title, Dorea/Rose is going to be a Sky Guardian?
10/1/2014 c1 Wingweaver1661
My interest is peaked...tell me more! I look forward to the next chapter! Your Inuyasha fanfiction was always great so I'm sure that this will be just as fantastic!
My interest is peaked...tell me more! I look forward to the next chapter! Your Inuyasha fanfiction was always great so I'm sure that this will be just as fantastic!
10/1/2014 c1
24InsaneScriptist
I think you're missing part of a sentence after you mentioned that Remus' werewolf status fixed him. It currently goes, 'all bound to have taken some damage, which made James Even third year would...'
Then there's a misspelling when you've mentioned the potion, as you have 'neithr man had the genius to invent it.'
Other than that, first review is mine! Onward story!

I think you're missing part of a sentence after you mentioned that Remus' werewolf status fixed him. It currently goes, 'all bound to have taken some damage, which made James Even third year would...'
Then there's a misspelling when you've mentioned the potion, as you have 'neithr man had the genius to invent it.'
Other than that, first review is mine! Onward story!