
2/26/2018 c1 biblepam
I truly enjoy a story with lots of sarcasm so I was wondering if you were going to write more than this one chapter. I see it's been a few years since you wrote this, so I'm guessing the answer is negative but thought I'd ask for the hell of it anyway!
I truly enjoy a story with lots of sarcasm so I was wondering if you were going to write more than this one chapter. I see it's been a few years since you wrote this, so I'm guessing the answer is negative but thought I'd ask for the hell of it anyway!
8/13/2015 c1 Atwiggs
I think it takes guts to write. I always thought that when I retired I would give it a try. My whole life changed and I am bedridden now. Anyway I think you are doing fine on this one so far. It's hard to get attention on here especially when you first start as a new writer. Don't give up sweetie!
I think it takes guts to write. I always thought that when I retired I would give it a try. My whole life changed and I am bedridden now. Anyway I think you are doing fine on this one so far. It's hard to get attention on here especially when you first start as a new writer. Don't give up sweetie!
3/19/2015 c1 Mitzi1958
More please! Like what are his thoughts whe falls in love with Bella? What does he think about her body? Yes I know he wants to drink her blood but what does he think about her body? Come on he has got to be thinking of very sarcastic thoughts about her mouth, her eys, her voice, her boobs, her ass!give us real life! Like when he stays with her at night when she passes gas! We all so it and at night you have no control over it! I hope you write more, this is different!
More please! Like what are his thoughts whe falls in love with Bella? What does he think about her body? Yes I know he wants to drink her blood but what does he think about her body? Come on he has got to be thinking of very sarcastic thoughts about her mouth, her eys, her voice, her boobs, her ass!give us real life! Like when he stays with her at night when she passes gas! We all so it and at night you have no control over it! I hope you write more, this is different!