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2/11 c1 LilLinkGirl
For your first work it wasn't bad. I enjoyed myself. Thank you for sharing!
9/11/2019 c1 6Spideyfangirl123
Lol! Please make more!
1/17/2015 c1 pedrokotii
*picks the jaw up from the deepest pits of hell, while still being in 'the other place'*
Ekhm...
That, Sir/Ma'am, was quite a story You created...
WHO AM I KIDDING? IT WAS SO AWESOME I FELL OFF THE CHAIR! #DO #MORE #NOW #!
11/19/2014 c1 anlmoon
very funny i like it it would be very logical how hell was run and the way you wrote about it. great story
10/24/2014 c1 1lovingtigers247
That was too funny for words! Keep it up!
10/22/2014 c1 13Rose Attack
Overall you have written a good story but I suggest that you re-read this or get a beta reader as there are spelling and grammatical errors.
10/1/2014 c1 Auburn
That was amazing! I'm seriously dying of laughter. And the cooking school thing was hilarious too! :)
10/2/2014 c1 CrazyWashu
Overall, this was a very creative and humorous twist to a basic plot seen over And over again on this site. There were a few grammar mistakes that could be fixed, but the idea of the story overshadowed those minor errors, a feat that few have achieved on this site. I must say, well done!
10/2/2014 c1 9Jovan2013
Awesome, Trigon is a pompous twit and all of the demon lord and ladies laughed at him. I wonder what Raven has inside her basket, is it a safer version of demonic magics so she could summon demons, knowledge of the universe or demonic weapons.

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