for The Third Pedrad2/16/2021 c39 paula'08
You had me doubting on which is my favourite character in this story, specially because I loved Tris and Uri's precious twin time, which in turn made me care about Uri even more than I already did in the original series. I was fond of Zeke since the start of this story, with his overprotectiveness and jealousy included, because they made him human and caring altogether. But damn, that speech would make me choose him in a heartbeat. I can totally see why this story was one of my favourites five years ago, and I just can't see why I didn't get round to stumbling upon it again to reread it before. I cried and laughed, because there are so many moments to praise in the story, good and bad.
You had me doubting on which is my favourite character in this story, specially because I loved Tris and Uri's precious twin time, which in turn made me care about Uri even more than I already did in the original series. I was fond of Zeke since the start of this story, with his overprotectiveness and jealousy included, because they made him human and caring altogether. But damn, that speech would make me choose him in a heartbeat. I can totally see why this story was one of my favourites five years ago, and I just can't see why I didn't get round to stumbling upon it again to reread it before. I cried and laughed, because there are so many moments to praise in the story, good and bad.
2/16/2021 c34 paula'08
Hope the mission goes well. Where does Eric stand in all of this? I wonder why Zeke got so mad
Hope the mission goes well. Where does Eric stand in all of this? I wonder why Zeke got so mad
2/16/2021 c33 paula'08
How did I NOT remember this? These are big news. I wonder what he means by regretting it, though he's definitely not making sense. It sure is typical to tease the person you like, but that was borderline sick, weird way of showing he cared, that guy.
How did I NOT remember this? These are big news. I wonder what he means by regretting it, though he's definitely not making sense. It sure is typical to tease the person you like, but that was borderline sick, weird way of showing he cared, that guy.
2/16/2021 c32 paula'08
I don't know how to feel about Zeke's worry for Tris and Tobias' response, not that it's surprising. Happy that she has so many loving people in her life? Worried? Hopefully they'll listen to Amar, though obviously their worries are not unfounded
I don't know how to feel about Zeke's worry for Tris and Tobias' response, not that it's surprising. Happy that she has so many loving people in her life? Worried? Hopefully they'll listen to Amar, though obviously their worries are not unfounded
2/16/2021 c31 paula'08
Looks like Hana read Tobias' mind when he was jealous of the family they'd built and said exactly what he needed to hear. I keep forgetting to say it, but I find it so funny that Uri's called Little Zeke and Tris is Lady Zeke according to Amar. That's vute
Looks like Hana read Tobias' mind when he was jealous of the family they'd built and said exactly what he needed to hear. I keep forgetting to say it, but I find it so funny that Uri's called Little Zeke and Tris is Lady Zeke according to Amar. That's vute
2/16/2021 c30 paula'08
I wonder if there's more to Eric's hatred towards Tris, though I kinda liked that her Dare for Peter was to fight him. It's so nice to see how many people Tris has rooting for her and doing everything there is to protect her
I wonder if there's more to Eric's hatred towards Tris, though I kinda liked that her Dare for Peter was to fight him. It's so nice to see how many people Tris has rooting for her and doing everything there is to protect her
2/16/2021 c29 paula'08
Way to go Chris! Tris' reaction to seeing Caleb (and the situation) was just priceless, it's just sad that Zeke would think he hadn't done nothing and that one of his worst fears could come true. The big bro talk was cute and I shed a few tears over it
Way to go Chris! Tris' reaction to seeing Caleb (and the situation) was just priceless, it's just sad that Zeke would think he hadn't done nothing and that one of his worst fears could come true. The big bro talk was cute and I shed a few tears over it
2/16/2021 c28 paula'08
Oh Zeke, what kind of dares will you have Four doing? I was grinning when Hana talked to Four, she's amazing that woman
Oh Zeke, what kind of dares will you have Four doing? I was grinning when Hana talked to Four, she's amazing that woman
2/16/2021 c27 paula'08
It's taken him long enough! Happy he's starting to realize something's off with this “sibling” relationship of Tris and Four's, lol.
It's taken him long enough! Happy he's starting to realize something's off with this “sibling” relationship of Tris and Four's, lol.
2/16/2021 c26 paula'08
It's so funny that she doesn't see herself as the strong and brave woman she is. I mean, she knows, just not to what extent
It's so funny that she doesn't see herself as the strong and brave woman she is. I mean, she knows, just not to what extent
2/16/2021 c25 paula'08
I love Tris and Uri's relationship. Christina's reaction was so childish, so much for being a good friend. She herself said no one liked Peter. I get she's jealous, but she's seen how much Tris has worked to get where she is. Besides, she's shown everything but weakness, lol. I hope Max will honor Nat's wish if worse comes to worse. The attack wasn't too surprising, considering that it's, well, Peter.
I love Tris and Uri's relationship. Christina's reaction was so childish, so much for being a good friend. She herself said no one liked Peter. I get she's jealous, but she's seen how much Tris has worked to get where she is. Besides, she's shown everything but weakness, lol. I hope Max will honor Nat's wish if worse comes to worse. The attack wasn't too surprising, considering that it's, well, Peter.