for The Third Pedrad2/6/2017 c6 dianesnyder
So glad your keeping up with the "basics" like the choosing ceremony and being divergent.
So glad your keeping up with the "basics" like the choosing ceremony and being divergent.
2/6/2017 c5 dianesnyder
That was a long chapter and it was awesome! I love that it's from Amar's POV.
That was a long chapter and it was awesome! I love that it's from Amar's POV.
2/5/2017 c1 dianesnyder
Enjoyed the first chapter. Glad you "skimmed" over the details & got right to zeke passing dauntless initiation. And glad you're keeping it canon (well kinda sorta).
Enjoyed the first chapter. Glad you "skimmed" over the details & got right to zeke passing dauntless initiation. And glad you're keeping it canon (well kinda sorta).
12/31/2016 c39 
7OfInkNRoses
this was absolutely beautiful to read
im so glad i stumbled on this fic
i really hope u make a sequel! this fanfic really gave me more insight on zeke, uriah and amar
tysm for taking the time to share this amazing fic
if you do write a sequal, please put up a notice on this fic so we'll get a notification, since im sure many of your readers will want to read it
7OfInkNRosesthis was absolutely beautiful to read
im so glad i stumbled on this fic
i really hope u make a sequel! this fanfic really gave me more insight on zeke, uriah and amar
tysm for taking the time to share this amazing fic
if you do write a sequal, please put up a notice on this fic so we'll get a notification, since im sure many of your readers will want to read it
8/15/2016 c39 Mtgora
Looking for new stories to write, I ran in to The Third Pedrad. I'm so glad I did. I really enjoyed your writing and loved reading through these chapters everyday. Mixing the story up and adding POVs of Amar and Zeke was wonderful. I thoroughly enjoyed being in their heads. I'm going to check out your other stories and hope you continue writing.
Looking for new stories to write, I ran in to The Third Pedrad. I'm so glad I did. I really enjoyed your writing and loved reading through these chapters everyday. Mixing the story up and adding POVs of Amar and Zeke was wonderful. I thoroughly enjoyed being in their heads. I'm going to check out your other stories and hope you continue writing.
7/22/2016 c39 ethereal
This is probolbly the best fic I have read in ages, you are truly an amazing writer.
This is probolbly the best fic I have read in ages, you are truly an amazing writer.