for The Third Pedrad7/3/2016 c39 Dulce129
Just read this entire story in two dAys - as recently recommend by author inopinion. Amazing story. Writing. Characters. Beautiful ending - although I would have loved to have read it from Four and Tris perspective. But glad for the happy ending. Thank you for finishing. Would love to see more Fourtris from you. You are an excellent writer and story teller.
Just read this entire story in two dAys - as recently recommend by author inopinion. Amazing story. Writing. Characters. Beautiful ending - although I would have loved to have read it from Four and Tris perspective. But glad for the happy ending. Thank you for finishing. Would love to see more Fourtris from you. You are an excellent writer and story teller.
7/3/2016 c39 
6Windchimed
This was a beautiful ending to a wonderful story. I have loved reading the ups and downs of these characters as they struggled through challenges and personal growth. Thank you so much for sharing this with us!
6WindchimedThis was a beautiful ending to a wonderful story. I have loved reading the ups and downs of these characters as they struggled through challenges and personal growth. Thank you so much for sharing this with us!
6/28/2016 c39 Guest
Beautiful ending. 3
Beautiful ending. 3
6/26/2016 c39 iamkatrina
This was one of my first Divergent stories I've read (like two years ago) and it has been so amazing since the start. I am so sad to see it go, and these update waits and been so worth it. Such an amazing story!
This was one of my first Divergent stories I've read (like two years ago) and it has been so amazing since the start. I am so sad to see it go, and these update waits and been so worth it. Such an amazing story!
6/28/2016 c39 Sawyerrr
Wow. This fic is definitely my favorite Divergent fanfic. Your writing and the detail you included in your chapters are incredible. Awesome. Thank you for sharing, and I hope you continue writing! Fanfic and real life, because your talent is amazing.
Wow. This fic is definitely my favorite Divergent fanfic. Your writing and the detail you included in your chapters are incredible. Awesome. Thank you for sharing, and I hope you continue writing! Fanfic and real life, because your talent is amazing.
6/27/2016 c39 bianconiglio
I was literally crying by the end of the chapter, it's amazing! Sincerely I was hoping in either Tris or four pov for the last chapter but zeke's one - even though unexpected - was amazing. You can really feel the brother love in each word of his speech. Thank you for having completed this fiction and I'm looking forward to some bonus chapters if you will ever feel like writing them. In the meanwhile I'm so damn happy about a new era, this is definitely one of my favourite ff ever and I can't wait to read more of it. Really, I'm so happy you're back :D
I was literally crying by the end of the chapter, it's amazing! Sincerely I was hoping in either Tris or four pov for the last chapter but zeke's one - even though unexpected - was amazing. You can really feel the brother love in each word of his speech. Thank you for having completed this fiction and I'm looking forward to some bonus chapters if you will ever feel like writing them. In the meanwhile I'm so damn happy about a new era, this is definitely one of my favourite ff ever and I can't wait to read more of it. Really, I'm so happy you're back :D
6/27/2016 c39 2sarahmicaela88
His speech made me cry. U should have included Ri and Tobias having children that would have been so amazing.
2sarahmicaela88His speech made me cry. U should have included Ri and Tobias having children that would have been so amazing.
6/25/2016 c38 Guest
Waited so long for this update ! Love it! Please let it continue or a sequel ! Love this
Waited so long for this update ! Love it! Please let it continue or a sequel ! Love this