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6/26/2016 c39 kristieb
Great chapter. Cant wait for more.
6/26/2016 c39 Faux914
I hate ends to stories and this one is no different. I hate that this is over.

I love the story and this ending leaves us knowing the family will go on. I really liked how it started with Zeke and end with him as done!

I won't be reading your Eric-Tris story...it's just sacrilegious in my eyes. If you ever do another Four-Tris I will be one of the first in line.

Thanks again for this taking the time and dedication to write and finish this story.
6/26/2016 c39 Castro05
Beautiful. I'm going to re read your story! Love it so much!
6/26/2016 c39 mosuzmartian
Thanks. This was great. I'm a hardcore Fourtris fan, but I will continue to look out for any more writing you do.
6/26/2016 c39 1BK2U
Beautiful speech, Zeke. Who knew he had it in him? :-)

Thanks for a lovely ending to a fun story!
6/26/2016 c39 scorpio2009
just found your story this past week. It was wonderful. A god and different plot, well written. You just seem to put your mind and love in it.
I would definitely read New Era, I love a good, well written story, and I love Eris!. Really hope you start that one again!
6/26/2016 c39 10inopinion
i hate commenting on last chapters because it's like it's really over. i really enjoyed this whole story. it was fun and sensitive and showed so much of Zeke's personality. and now it's marked as complete, but I will keep thinking about this Pedrad family and what they'll do in the ups and downs of Dauntless life well beyond the storybook ending. Be well and stay creative.
6/26/2016 c39 8Savanah Rose
Nicely ended. Thank you for taking the time to come back and finish this story.

Best wishes on your future writing.
6/26/2016 c39 enj412
Great ending! Although I would love to read about the wedding through FourTris perspective, it was very fitting for this story to be Zeke's POV. Thanks for sharing this great story.
6/26/2016 c39 28cjgwilliams
Sniffle...that was the sweetest ending! This was an amazing story and I'm so happy to have found it! I hope you write FourTris again...sorry, I can't abide Eris lol!
6/26/2016 c39 14It'sHardIKnow
OMFG THIS IS TOO CUTE!
NOOOOO
6/26/2016 c39 2sporadiccritic
That was a nice ending!
6/23/2016 c38 flygirl
One of the best fanfictions I have ever read. I like it much more than Veronica's books (no offense to her, because she gave us these characters).
6/24/2016 c25 2lizzardsneek
Holy shit it's my first time I'm reading this and it's just ashdbdjsbdxj *sobs and squeals*
6/22/2016 c38 Guest
This is freaking amazing what the heck I love it
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