
6/26/2016 c39 Faux914
I hate ends to stories and this one is no different. I hate that this is over.
I love the story and this ending leaves us knowing the family will go on. I really liked how it started with Zeke and end with him as done!
I won't be reading your Eric-Tris story...it's just sacrilegious in my eyes. If you ever do another Four-Tris I will be one of the first in line.
Thanks again for this taking the time and dedication to write and finish this story.
I hate ends to stories and this one is no different. I hate that this is over.
I love the story and this ending leaves us knowing the family will go on. I really liked how it started with Zeke and end with him as done!
I won't be reading your Eric-Tris story...it's just sacrilegious in my eyes. If you ever do another Four-Tris I will be one of the first in line.
Thanks again for this taking the time and dedication to write and finish this story.
6/26/2016 c39 mosuzmartian
Thanks. This was great. I'm a hardcore Fourtris fan, but I will continue to look out for any more writing you do.
Thanks. This was great. I'm a hardcore Fourtris fan, but I will continue to look out for any more writing you do.
6/26/2016 c39
1BK2U
Beautiful speech, Zeke. Who knew he had it in him? :-)
Thanks for a lovely ending to a fun story!

Beautiful speech, Zeke. Who knew he had it in him? :-)
Thanks for a lovely ending to a fun story!
6/26/2016 c39 scorpio2009
just found your story this past week. It was wonderful. A god and different plot, well written. You just seem to put your mind and love in it.
I would definitely read New Era, I love a good, well written story, and I love Eris!. Really hope you start that one again!
just found your story this past week. It was wonderful. A god and different plot, well written. You just seem to put your mind and love in it.
I would definitely read New Era, I love a good, well written story, and I love Eris!. Really hope you start that one again!
6/26/2016 c39
10inopinion
i hate commenting on last chapters because it's like it's really over. i really enjoyed this whole story. it was fun and sensitive and showed so much of Zeke's personality. and now it's marked as complete, but I will keep thinking about this Pedrad family and what they'll do in the ups and downs of Dauntless life well beyond the storybook ending. Be well and stay creative.

i hate commenting on last chapters because it's like it's really over. i really enjoyed this whole story. it was fun and sensitive and showed so much of Zeke's personality. and now it's marked as complete, but I will keep thinking about this Pedrad family and what they'll do in the ups and downs of Dauntless life well beyond the storybook ending. Be well and stay creative.
6/26/2016 c39
8Savanah Rose
Nicely ended. Thank you for taking the time to come back and finish this story.
Best wishes on your future writing.

Nicely ended. Thank you for taking the time to come back and finish this story.
Best wishes on your future writing.
6/26/2016 c39 enj412
Great ending! Although I would love to read about the wedding through FourTris perspective, it was very fitting for this story to be Zeke's POV. Thanks for sharing this great story.
Great ending! Although I would love to read about the wedding through FourTris perspective, it was very fitting for this story to be Zeke's POV. Thanks for sharing this great story.
6/26/2016 c39
28cjgwilliams
Sniffle...that was the sweetest ending! This was an amazing story and I'm so happy to have found it! I hope you write FourTris again...sorry, I can't abide Eris lol!

Sniffle...that was the sweetest ending! This was an amazing story and I'm so happy to have found it! I hope you write FourTris again...sorry, I can't abide Eris lol!
6/23/2016 c38 flygirl
One of the best fanfictions I have ever read. I like it much more than Veronica's books (no offense to her, because she gave us these characters).
One of the best fanfictions I have ever read. I like it much more than Veronica's books (no offense to her, because she gave us these characters).
6/24/2016 c25
2lizzardsneek
Holy shit it's my first time I'm reading this and it's just ashdbdjsbdxj *sobs and squeals*

Holy shit it's my first time I'm reading this and it's just ashdbdjsbdxj *sobs and squeals*
6/22/2016 c38 Guest
This is freaking amazing what the heck I love it
This is freaking amazing what the heck I love it