for The Third Pedrad6/21/2016 c38 
2DauntlessGirl75
Could you do a sequel to the story about Four and Tris's life after all of this? Or from the perspective of one of their children or something?
2DauntlessGirl75Could you do a sequel to the story about Four and Tris's life after all of this? Or from the perspective of one of their children or something?
6/21/2016 c38 enj412
Thanks so much for updating! I had really missed this story and am so happy you're finishing it. I loved reading Zeke's POV and how he handled the talk with Four. I greatly look forward to the epilogue!
Thanks so much for updating! I had really missed this story and am so happy you're finishing it. I loved reading Zeke's POV and how he handled the talk with Four. I greatly look forward to the epilogue!
6/21/2016 c38 Sawyerrr
You absolutely made my day today, seeing an update from you. Your story has been my favorite fanfic and I've enjoyed reading it. I can tell how much thought and effort you put into each chapter.. your writing is amazing. I'm sad to see this end, but thank you for sharing.
Best,
Sawyerrr
You absolutely made my day today, seeing an update from you. Your story has been my favorite fanfic and I've enjoyed reading it. I can tell how much thought and effort you put into each chapter.. your writing is amazing. I'm sad to see this end, but thank you for sharing.
Best,
Sawyerrr
6/21/2016 c38 19Naruisawesome
Aww, this was sweet! XD Though I was kinda confused about what was happening since it had been so long...lol.
19NaruisawesomeAww, this was sweet! XD Though I was kinda confused about what was happening since it had been so long...lol.
6/21/2016 c38 28cjgwilliams
I can't tell you how ridiculously happy I was to see this update! I'm thrilled Zeke didn't die and I love the peace he made with himself and Four. I'm sad this is ending but look forward to the epilogue, where hopefully Four and Tris are together!
28cjgwilliamsI can't tell you how ridiculously happy I was to see this update! I'm thrilled Zeke didn't die and I love the peace he made with himself and Four. I'm sad this is ending but look forward to the epilogue, where hopefully Four and Tris are together!
6/21/2016 c1 5crazychessgurl
Holy sh*t, pardon my language but I've been reading this since day 1 and now it's nearly finished?. Sh*t.
5crazychessgurlHoly sh*t, pardon my language but I've been reading this since day 1 and now it's nearly finished?. Sh*t.
6/21/2016 c38 vfrcdexswzaq
Holy crap I thought this story was over. Not many writers would have the guts to continue a story after so long, even if they wanted to. So thank you. Also your writing skills are amazing.
Holy crap I thought this story was over. Not many writers would have the guts to continue a story after so long, even if they wanted to. So thank you. Also your writing skills are amazing.
6/18/2016 c1 Guest
It's been a year sine the last update, which is weird because that's how long I've waited. I seriously miss this story, and I don't know if you are going to continue it or not. It's got to be my all time favorites (that probably why I have been checking everyday for the past year to see if you update). However, I completely understand if you decide not to continue. I love you, and hope nothing bad has happened to you.
It's been a year sine the last update, which is weird because that's how long I've waited. I seriously miss this story, and I don't know if you are going to continue it or not. It's got to be my all time favorites (that probably why I have been checking everyday for the past year to see if you update). However, I completely understand if you decide not to continue. I love you, and hope nothing bad has happened to you.
5/18/2016 c37 Guest
Is Zeke okay!? #Fourtris & #Sheke
Is Zeke okay!? #Fourtris & #Sheke
4/29/2016 c37 mosuzmartian
This is an amazing story. If u find the timedesire it would be wonderful to see it finished.
This is an amazing story. If u find the timedesire it would be wonderful to see it finished.
4/20/2016 c37 Guest
Omg Omg Omg u NEED to update soon pls! Ive read this more times than the actual book pls i need to know if Ezi's ok!
Omg Omg Omg u NEED to update soon pls! Ive read this more times than the actual book pls i need to know if Ezi's ok!
4/3/2016 c37 fourtris1012
This is an amazing fanfic and one of my favorites that i've read. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
This is an amazing fanfic and one of my favorites that i've read. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
3/20/2016 c37 Guest
OMG could u update pls ... Such a good plot... I need to know what happens
OMG could u update pls ... Such a good plot... I need to know what happens
3/16/2016 c37 Rose Latini
omg please keep writing I need to know what max chooses to do, I need to know if seek wakes up. this story is sooo good please Finnish it PLEASE!
omg please keep writing I need to know what max chooses to do, I need to know if seek wakes up. this story is sooo good please Finnish it PLEASE!