for The Third Pedrad10/9/2015 c26 hungerdivergentgames
great story and has a great plot. I hope you continue writing but I understand if you can't. great work so far I will always be a fan. I hope it's not over. good luck for the story!
great story and has a great plot. I hope you continue writing but I understand if you can't. great work so far I will always be a fan. I hope it's not over. good luck for the story!
9/15/2015 c37 natalie
please keep writing!
please keep writing!
8/24/2015 c1 
18catalystkrish
OMGOMGOMGOMG! This literally has to be one of ur best writings eva. I can't believe u didn't tell me about this sooner! I am seriously fangirling right now- I shall never forgive u for holding out on me. This is a very popular FourTris story, post it on Wattpad NOW!
18catalystkrishOMGOMGOMGOMG! This literally has to be one of ur best writings eva. I can't believe u didn't tell me about this sooner! I am seriously fangirling right now- I shall never forgive u for holding out on me. This is a very popular FourTris story, post it on Wattpad NOW!
7/26/2015 c37 1Outsider-Centric
I love you're story. I've read it thousands of times. I would love it if you would update ;)
1Outsider-CentricI love you're story. I've read it thousands of times. I would love it if you would update ;)
7/13/2015 c37 Guest
I was just re- reading your A/N and now understand very well your lack of posting. I have personally dealt with several of my own demons in the past year, and want to let you know that I will pray for you. But anyways, I still live your story and hope for updates as often as you can post them
I was just re- reading your A/N and now understand very well your lack of posting. I have personally dealt with several of my own demons in the past year, and want to let you know that I will pray for you. But anyways, I still live your story and hope for updates as often as you can post them
7/12/2015 c37 Guest
Thank you soo much for updating! I actually didn't know until today, because I just decided to search it to see if there was any activity. I hadn't been checking because it's been a while. I love this story and please keep updating.
Thank you soo much for updating! I actually didn't know until today, because I just decided to search it to see if there was any activity. I hadn't been checking because it's been a while. I love this story and please keep updating.
7/11/2015 c1 sarah88
Please update this story please! I so need 2 read more please!
Please update this story please! I so need 2 read more please!
7/11/2015 c37 Guest
PLZ FINISH THIS SOON
PLZ FINISH THIS SOON
7/11/2015 c37 Lexi
Okay so I know how a lot of authors hate when you say "UPDATE" and I'm kind of doing that but I would like you to update because your story is so good. I really like the twist and everything on the original divergent. You kind of left all of us readers on a cliff hanger and you made me really think about how everything could end up. Thanks for reading my long review. And I love your book, keep writing your AMAZING book!
~Lexi P
Okay so I know how a lot of authors hate when you say "UPDATE" and I'm kind of doing that but I would like you to update because your story is so good. I really like the twist and everything on the original divergent. You kind of left all of us readers on a cliff hanger and you made me really think about how everything could end up. Thanks for reading my long review. And I love your book, keep writing your AMAZING book!
~Lexi P
7/10/2015 c37 cashewhoneycakes
Hihi! I just found your story and read the whole thing in the last few days. It is by far the best Divergent fabric I've read. Love it! And I hope you can find the time to keep it going to the end.
Hihi! I just found your story and read the whole thing in the last few days. It is by far the best Divergent fabric I've read. Love it! And I hope you can find the time to keep it going to the end.
6/29/2015 c33 Guest
Uh gross. This chapter made my stomach turn! Please tell me that this isn't gonna be Eric and tris... Gross
Uh gross. This chapter made my stomach turn! Please tell me that this isn't gonna be Eric and tris... Gross