for The Third Pedrad6/28/2015 c37 
1TrisTobyUri
Oh my goodness gracious! I've been reading your story from chapter 1 to here, in about 3 hours! I love the bond between all the characters! It's amazing. This is one of my favorite stories! I can't wait for your next update!
1TrisTobyUriOh my goodness gracious! I've been reading your story from chapter 1 to here, in about 3 hours! I love the bond between all the characters! It's amazing. This is one of my favorite stories! I can't wait for your next update!
6/26/2015 c37 Bamcn24
Thanks for the update
Thanks for the update
6/26/2015 c37 Rose
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You have to complete what you started, you don't just start a painting and then never finish it, unless you die of course, but if you are not dead, then PLLEEEAAAASSSSSEEEEEE finish your fanfiution croon, I REEAAALLLLYYYYY want to know what happens next
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You have to complete what you started, you don't just start a painting and then never finish it, unless you die of course, but if you are not dead, then PLLEEEAAAASSSSSEEEEEE finish your fanfiution croon, I REEAAALLLLYYYYY want to know what happens next
6/26/2015 c37 Rose
The-real-life-Tris
PLLEEEAAAASSSSSEEEEEE UPDATE! Your fanfiction is really good, and I have read about 500 fanfictions, so that is saying a lot. So could you do lots of us who have read your fanfiction a favore and continue your fanfiction, you don't want to be one of the people that start fanfictions but don't finish them do you, I absolutly despise those, when you sta
The-real-life-Tris
PLLEEEAAAASSSSSEEEEEE UPDATE! Your fanfiction is really good, and I have read about 500 fanfictions, so that is saying a lot. So could you do lots of us who have read your fanfiction a favore and continue your fanfiction, you don't want to be one of the people that start fanfictions but don't finish them do you, I absolutly despise those, when you sta
6/25/2015 c37 Sam
That was a good chapter , but I can't wait to read more and see what happens ... Yu know if zeke ever wakes up , what happens to max , and all the other traitors... Awesome author
That was a good chapter , but I can't wait to read more and see what happens ... Yu know if zeke ever wakes up , what happens to max , and all the other traitors... Awesome author
6/25/2015 c37 bahrfamily
I don't think he deserves the option of Factionless. I think he should jump, or face trial in Candor. Factionless leaves him intact to make more bad decisions.
I don't think he deserves the option of Factionless. I think he should jump, or face trial in Candor. Factionless leaves him intact to make more bad decisions.
6/22/2015 c37 sarah88
I feel 4 her and i empathize with her, all this is Max's fault if he had gotten over a high school crush grudge none of this would have ever happened. It really was all his doing and u knw what they say pay back is a bitch and he's getting his right now. Natalie even 4rm up above must b hating him rite now. Write more update becauz this story is AWSOME and PLEASE don't let Ezie die please
I feel 4 her and i empathize with her, all this is Max's fault if he had gotten over a high school crush grudge none of this would have ever happened. It really was all his doing and u knw what they say pay back is a bitch and he's getting his right now. Natalie even 4rm up above must b hating him rite now. Write more update becauz this story is AWSOME and PLEASE don't let Ezie die please
6/22/2015 c37 Zamilovany
Hope you begin to feel better soon. Thank you for updating it is very much appreciated specially since you've been sick that just shows how awesome you are! Great chapter sad but good. I really hope Zeke makes it out okay. I didn't see the whole Max situation coming I hope he jumps being faction,ess would be letting him off to easy although I guess jumping is also an easy way out.
Hope you begin to feel better soon. Thank you for updating it is very much appreciated specially since you've been sick that just shows how awesome you are! Great chapter sad but good. I really hope Zeke makes it out okay. I didn't see the whole Max situation coming I hope he jumps being faction,ess would be letting him off to easy although I guess jumping is also an easy way out.
6/20/2015 c1 sarah88
This story is adorable I absolutely love it. This is like the fifth story that i have read when tris is a Pedrad and 2 b frank I love them they are AWSOME but how does it conflict with if trisfour happens? LOL
This story is adorable I absolutely love it. This is like the fifth story that i have read when tris is a Pedrad and 2 b frank I love them they are AWSOME but how does it conflict with if trisfour happens? LOL
6/20/2015 c37 guest
is max tris's dad and s that the reason why Jeanine didn't want to take tris in
is max tris's dad and s that the reason why Jeanine didn't want to take tris in
6/19/2015 c37 Guest
This chapter was awesome! I'm so glad you're returning to this story, I love it so much!
This chapter was awesome! I'm so glad you're returning to this story, I love it so much!
6/19/2015 c37 Guest
Great update! Haha oh Four.. So worried
Also, I really recommend seeing a therapist (keep in mind that sometimes it takes a couple of tries to find one that you click with) but talking with a third party helps. Sometimes you need an extra bump with meds, and there's nothing wrong with that. I've been there.
Great update! Haha oh Four.. So worried
Also, I really recommend seeing a therapist (keep in mind that sometimes it takes a couple of tries to find one that you click with) but talking with a third party helps. Sometimes you need an extra bump with meds, and there's nothing wrong with that. I've been there.
6/20/2015 c37 2AlexLunaaah
This is such a good/addicting story I read all of it in one day. I hope you update soon!
2AlexLunaaahThis is such a good/addicting story I read all of it in one day. I hope you update soon!
6/20/2015 c37 Sarcasm-is-life
Woah. I just spent a whole day reading this fanfiction. This only requires two words... No regrets. I'm going crazy! I'm gonna cry so hard if Zeke dies! Great job, and I hope that you feel better soon, even though it's hard. Thank you so much for writing this amazing fanfiction! :-D
Woah. I just spent a whole day reading this fanfiction. This only requires two words... No regrets. I'm going crazy! I'm gonna cry so hard if Zeke dies! Great job, and I hope that you feel better soon, even though it's hard. Thank you so much for writing this amazing fanfiction! :-D