for The Third Pedrad6/19/2015 c37 
10inopinion
Might I say, I'm so very happy to see an update. But even more, I hope you continue to feel better about life. I send you my best wishes.
10inopinionMight I say, I'm so very happy to see an update. But even more, I hope you continue to feel better about life. I send you my best wishes.
6/19/2015 c37 6Windchimed
I'm glad to see you're working on this story again, though I'm sorry to hear you've been having a rough time. Life gets pretty damned hard sometimes, but it gets better again too. I hope things continue to improve for you.
By the way, this chapter was good, as always. You have a lot of talent.
6WindchimedI'm glad to see you're working on this story again, though I'm sorry to hear you've been having a rough time. Life gets pretty damned hard sometimes, but it gets better again too. I hope things continue to improve for you.
By the way, this chapter was good, as always. You have a lot of talent.
6/19/2015 c37 8Savanah Rose
Glad to have you back.
Interesting how Max's jealous streak from long ago has had such an impact! Wow! Don't know for sure which option I'm hoping he takes.
I'm still pulling for Zeke.
8Savanah RoseGlad to have you back.
Interesting how Max's jealous streak from long ago has had such an impact! Wow! Don't know for sure which option I'm hoping he takes.
I'm still pulling for Zeke.
6/19/2015 c37 Rensie
is max tris dad ? i kinda got the feeling he was going to say that...
hope you feel better soon and are able to put your demons at rest
is max tris dad ? i kinda got the feeling he was going to say that...
hope you feel better soon and are able to put your demons at rest
6/19/2015 c37 Faux914
Thanks for updating. I really enjoyed this story and was very pleasantly surprised when this chapter notice showed up.
Wow. Fantastic chapter. It's so nice to see this family unit in action. Love how dedicated Tris is and Amar is always a wonderful voice of reason and honesty.
I can't wait to see where this will go.
Thanks for updating. I really enjoyed this story and was very pleasantly surprised when this chapter notice showed up.
Wow. Fantastic chapter. It's so nice to see this family unit in action. Love how dedicated Tris is and Amar is always a wonderful voice of reason and honesty.
I can't wait to see where this will go.
6/19/2015 c37 kristieb
I'm hoping this message finds you healing. Inside and out.
This is a great chapter. Lots of good stuff to keep working with. Keep up the good work. Have faith in yourself and your feelings for the characters in your story. They will see you through.
I'm hoping this message finds you healing. Inside and out.
This is a great chapter. Lots of good stuff to keep working with. Keep up the good work. Have faith in yourself and your feelings for the characters in your story. They will see you through.
6/19/2015 c37 catch39
Both choices seems l good to me for Max. Hope you are better and stay healthy m
Both choices seems l good to me for Max. Hope you are better and stay healthy m
6/19/2015 c37 1Dauntless Blasian
Oh you tell him girl. I hope Zeke will be okay. Other wise amazing chapter update soon please.
1Dauntless BlasianOh you tell him girl. I hope Zeke will be okay. Other wise amazing chapter update soon please.
6/17/2015 c36 Guest
Please, please, please update! This story is awesome! I want to know whether or not Zeke dies.
Please, please, please update! This story is awesome! I want to know whether or not Zeke dies.