for The Third Pedrad2/16/2021 c24 paula'08
Zeke's so oblivious, seriously! I can't believe he thought the girl was Lauren and that Tris liked Jake. It's amusing, really. I'm not too worried about them being caught, but I can only wonder what they'll find in Max's office..., Nat's letter?
Zeke's so oblivious, seriously! I can't believe he thought the girl was Lauren and that Tris liked Jake. It's amusing, really. I'm not too worried about them being caught, but I can only wonder what they'll find in Max's office..., Nat's letter?
2/16/2021 c23 paula'08
Tobias Eaton, are you thinking of marriage already? I'm glad things ended well between them in the chapter and that she got back home safely. I can't help but wonder when they'll tell Zeke, though, I'm so excited about that. It's so beauitful to reread a story when you don't have all of the details straight after a long time, it brings back the magic of it all and I love it
Tobias Eaton, are you thinking of marriage already? I'm glad things ended well between them in the chapter and that she got back home safely. I can't help but wonder when they'll tell Zeke, though, I'm so excited about that. It's so beauitful to reread a story when you don't have all of the details straight after a long time, it brings back the magic of it all and I love it
2/16/2021 c22 paula'08
Tobias don't be a jerk you idiot! It's not like she chose for you to be there! Besides, the fear's not even about you specifically! Well, to be fair he doesn't know that, but he still should've let Tris explain. This can't be good
Tobias don't be a jerk you idiot! It's not like she chose for you to be there! Besides, the fear's not even about you specifically! Well, to be fair he doesn't know that, but he still should've let Tris explain. This can't be good
2/16/2021 c21 paula'08
As many mistakes as Max has made through the years, this chapter was so full of emotion and melancholy. Unrequited love hurts, it's even worse that it was his best friend and that she died so early. I'm glad Eric will be voted out of leadership and Tobias will take it up for the time-being, though. I can't seem to remember if Tris actually became leader later on, though
As many mistakes as Max has made through the years, this chapter was so full of emotion and melancholy. Unrequited love hurts, it's even worse that it was his best friend and that she died so early. I'm glad Eric will be voted out of leadership and Tobias will take it up for the time-being, though. I can't seem to remember if Tris actually became leader later on, though
2/16/2021 c20 paula'08
Damn, that talk must've hit home for Max. He deserved it, though, and it's obvious Tobias would do anything to keep Tris safe. As would Zeke, obviously.
Damn, that talk must've hit home for Max. He deserved it, though, and it's obvious Tobias would do anything to keep Tris safe. As would Zeke, obviously.
2/16/2021 c19 paula'08
I was so happy throughout the whole of this chapter! They're too cute, and I'm so happy he finally confessed his feelings for her. And in what a way! Tobias was so sweet and caring, I smiled so hard, man.
I was so happy throughout the whole of this chapter! They're too cute, and I'm so happy he finally confessed his feelings for her. And in what a way! Tobias was so sweet and caring, I smiled so hard, man.
2/15/2021 c18 paula'08
It's so nice to see her finally calling him Tobias. I'm so happy neither Uri nor Tris were in the dorm. I like Edward, but the Pedrads are the Pedrads abd there's no other way around it!
It's so nice to see her finally calling him Tobias. I'm so happy neither Uri nor Tris were in the dorm. I like Edward, but the Pedrads are the Pedrads abd there's no other way around it!
2/15/2021 c17 paula'08
It's funny to see many people have realized Tris and Tobias' feelings for each other but for Zeke and themselves.
It's funny to see many people have realized Tris and Tobias' feelings for each other but for Zeke and themselves.
2/15/2021 c16 paula'08
I'd usually hate meddlers, but I gotta say Janet was smooth and I'm glad she made her realize or at least think she doesn’t see Tobias as a brother. I love how they ended up being close when she fell asleep after Molly's attempted attack
I'd usually hate meddlers, but I gotta say Janet was smooth and I'm glad she made her realize or at least think she doesn’t see Tobias as a brother. I love how they ended up being close when she fell asleep after Molly's attempted attack
2/15/2021 c15 paula'08
I've taken a liking of Lauren and Janet. I was happy that Lauren made Zeke hint if Tris liked a guy he'd be okay with it to Tobias without really realizing what he was doing. Janet seems like a very sweet and caring woman
I've taken a liking of Lauren and Janet. I was happy that Lauren made Zeke hint if Tris liked a guy he'd be okay with it to Tobias without really realizing what he was doing. Janet seems like a very sweet and caring woman
2/15/2021 c14 paula'08
I love that Lauren caught up on both their feeligs for each other. Also, as much as the fight shouldn’t have gone that way, go Tris for beating Eric! Zeke going all overprotective brother is cute, it's so obvious that he loves her and it was funny to see his reaction to twin time
I love that Lauren caught up on both their feeligs for each other. Also, as much as the fight shouldn’t have gone that way, go Tris for beating Eric! Zeke going all overprotective brother is cute, it's so obvious that he loves her and it was funny to see his reaction to twin time
2/15/2021 c13 paula'08
No, Tris, he doesn't see you as his sister! Well at least she doesn’t have to fight Eric of all people, Lauren’s a good enough option.
No, Tris, he doesn't see you as his sister! Well at least she doesn’t have to fight Eric of all people, Lauren’s a good enough option.
2/15/2021 c12 paula'08
That was such a heartfelt conversation. I'm glad she let herself be vulnerable around him and told him all about her past. Hopefully things start to look up for them from her and on
That was such a heartfelt conversation. I'm glad she let herself be vulnerable around him and told him all about her past. Hopefully things start to look up for them from her and on
2/15/2021 c11 paula'08
Eric really thought this out! Oh, Zeke, if only you realized Tobias doesn't care about her as his little sister, but much more than that
Eric really thought this out! Oh, Zeke, if only you realized Tobias doesn't care about her as his little sister, but much more than that
2/15/2021 c10 paula'08
Clearly Tobias can read Tris well, or has at the very least gotten to know her well to know she'd only hurt someone that way if she'd been hurt before, which she had. I hope she's honest with him at some point, though, that they both are. It's funny to reread this story with a whole new vision after so long, I guess. I love it all the same, though I didn't remember the details and had an overall picutre of the storyline and how much I enjoyed it at the time.
Clearly Tobias can read Tris well, or has at the very least gotten to know her well to know she'd only hurt someone that way if she'd been hurt before, which she had. I hope she's honest with him at some point, though, that they both are. It's funny to reread this story with a whole new vision after so long, I guess. I love it all the same, though I didn't remember the details and had an overall picutre of the storyline and how much I enjoyed it at the time.