for The Third Pedrad6/15/2015 c36 sheo777
Mate, the wait is seriously killing me.
Mate, the wait is seriously killing me.
6/7/2015 c14 Shai
Ok so I kind of think that this story is unrealistic I mean what pisses me off is that tris keeps beating everyone I don't think she should have beat eric or lauren it just gets old saying how she is better than everyone I mean next your going to say she gets into a fight with four and wins I think four should stay the dauntless prodigy and also you make tris sound indestructible when in the book she was not the best at fighting.
Ok so I kind of think that this story is unrealistic I mean what pisses me off is that tris keeps beating everyone I don't think she should have beat eric or lauren it just gets old saying how she is better than everyone I mean next your going to say she gets into a fight with four and wins I think four should stay the dauntless prodigy and also you make tris sound indestructible when in the book she was not the best at fighting.
6/3/2015 c36 Guest
Updated you're killing me
Updated you're killing me
5/24/2015 c36 Guest
I need more! More chapters please!
I need more! More chapters please!
5/24/2015 c36 Faux914
Liked your take on the story. Loved the close siblings as well as the different points of view.
Liked your take on the story. Loved the close siblings as well as the different points of view.
5/22/2015 c36 guest
OMG I love your fan fiction its my favourite one and believe me I have a long bookmark list. Please update soon I would really like to find out if Ezi dies or not. I would be quite upset if he did die but then again I would understand plus it would add a great twist to the story but I still don't want him to die.
p.s. Its driving me mad not knowing what's going to happen to Ezi and how everyone reacts so I would really appreciate it if you updated soon.
p.p.s If you've decided to abandon this fan fiction then please say but I would like you to know your fan fiction is super unique and I love it so at least sum it up (a happy ending would greatly be appreciated).
OMG I love your fan fiction its my favourite one and believe me I have a long bookmark list. Please update soon I would really like to find out if Ezi dies or not. I would be quite upset if he did die but then again I would understand plus it would add a great twist to the story but I still don't want him to die.
p.s. Its driving me mad not knowing what's going to happen to Ezi and how everyone reacts so I would really appreciate it if you updated soon.
p.p.s If you've decided to abandon this fan fiction then please say but I would like you to know your fan fiction is super unique and I love it so at least sum it up (a happy ending would greatly be appreciated).
5/19/2015 c32 Guest
Why is Zeke worried about Tris but not Uriah? Why does he love her more than he loves Uriah?
Why is Zeke worried about Tris but not Uriah? Why does he love her more than he loves Uriah?
5/18/2015 c36 Guest
Please update! I really like your story. I hope you don't abandon it.
Please update! I really like your story. I hope you don't abandon it.
25/18/2015 c36 MrsEaton6410
Omg please continue! It is so hard to find divergent fanfics that I like and this is pure gold! I finished reading chapter 36 about a month ago and the suspense is killing meeee. I totally understand that you're probably busy or have lost interest, but if it's incouragement you're lacking, please please please keep this in mind. I love your work and am having withdrawal issues . A new chapter or even a new sentence would mean the world to me. It's not like I stayed up until 4 am reading this... Or wait maybe I did... Oh well it was worth take this into consideration and keep doing what you're doing! Sincerely - Gretchen.H Maryland, USA. 4
Omg please continue! It is so hard to find divergent fanfics that I like and this is pure gold! I finished reading chapter 36 about a month ago and the suspense is killing meeee. I totally understand that you're probably busy or have lost interest, but if it's incouragement you're lacking, please please please keep this in mind. I love your work and am having withdrawal issues . A new chapter or even a new sentence would mean the world to me. It's not like I stayed up until 4 am reading this... Or wait maybe I did... Oh well it was worth take this into consideration and keep doing what you're doing! Sincerely - Gretchen.H Maryland, USA. 4
5/2/2015 c36 Something123
Can you just say if u r not doing any more so I can loose this link?
Can you just say if u r not doing any more so I can loose this link?
5/1/2015 c36 Something123
When are you updating! Do it nowwwwwwwww
When are you updating! Do it nowwwwwwwww