for The Third Pedrad4/11/2015 c16 Trislover67
AWESOME AWESOME AND AWESOME
AWESOME AWESOME AND AWESOME
4/13/2015 c36 Zamilovany
Your killing me with the cliff hangers! I can't believe Caleb had the ahem to actually pull the trigger I dislike him even more!
Your killing me with the cliff hangers! I can't believe Caleb had the ahem to actually pull the trigger I dislike him even more!
4/11/2015 c1 Trislover167
AWESOME
AWESOME
4/10/2015 c36 Gabby Bevan
This is such a good story please update
This is such a good story please update
4/10/2015 c36 Guest
IM DYING PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE UPDATE NOW NOW NOW would be good!
IM DYING PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE UPDATE NOW NOW NOW would be good!
4/9/2015 c36 Guest
Loved the chapter I hope zeke is going to be ok
Loved the chapter I hope zeke is going to be ok
4/8/2015 c36 Guest
MORE ! MORE ! MORE ! ALWAYS MORE !
MORE ! MORE ! MORE ! ALWAYS MORE !
4/8/2015 c36 Guest
Oh shit. For the love of God please don't kill him. Damn it! And what was in the prior file? Can't wait for the next chapter!
Oh shit. For the love of God please don't kill him. Damn it! And what was in the prior file? Can't wait for the next chapter!
4/8/2015 c36 Guest
Zeke cannot die! Caleb can go away, but not Zeke!
Zeke cannot die! Caleb can go away, but not Zeke!
4/8/2015 c36 Izzy05
That was a great chapter! Thank you for updating so quickly to solve our cliffhanger woes. Please don't let Zeke die, Tris needs her big brother!
That was a great chapter! Thank you for updating so quickly to solve our cliffhanger woes. Please don't let Zeke die, Tris needs her big brother!
4/9/2015 c1 
3tkdginger98
You are a genius! This is wonderfully written, and I can't wait for an update! :)
3tkdginger98You are a genius! This is wonderfully written, and I can't wait for an update! :)
4/7/2015 c35 Guest
You left me hanging. I have a hole in my heart and I'm bleeding out. Ahhhhhh. UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE ! Pretty Please ️
You left me hanging. I have a hole in my heart and I'm bleeding out. Ahhhhhh. UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE ! Pretty Please ️
4/7/2015 c35 FourTrisLover
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I am dying...
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I am dying...