for The Third Pedrad3/4/2015 c32 Guest
Wow this story is soooo amazing:)... Can't wait till the next update..."L"
Wow this story is soooo amazing:)... Can't wait till the next update..."L"
3/3/2015 c32 Guest
WEUH! YOURE UPDATING AGAIN! THIS MADE MY WEEK! :DDDD
WEUH! YOURE UPDATING AGAIN! THIS MADE MY WEEK! :DDDD
3/3/2015 c32 Guest
Great chapter! Update soon!
Great chapter! Update soon!
3/3/2015 c32 Guest
loved the chapter, look forward to more. Hopefully no one dies...
loved the chapter, look forward to more. Hopefully no one dies...
3/5/2015 c24 catch39
Zeke in his overprotective big brother persona with his blinders firmly in place is so enjoyable to read.
Zeke in his overprotective big brother persona with his blinders firmly in place is so enjoyable to read.
3/3/2015 c32 Guest
Thank you for updating again so quickly. It's great to have this wonderful story back.
Thank you for updating again so quickly. It's great to have this wonderful story back.
3/4/2015 c23 catch39
Good one. They figured out how to talks things out. Enjoying the twist in the story.
Good one. They figured out how to talks things out. Enjoying the twist in the story.
3/4/2015 c22 catch39
Communication clearly isn't Four ' s forte. They need Amar on speed dial, he always untangles their messed up minds quickly.
Communication clearly isn't Four ' s forte. They need Amar on speed dial, he always untangles their messed up minds quickly.
3/4/2015 c21 catch39
Yay! Eric is going to blow a gasket though. The aftermath is not going to be pretty.
Yay! Eric is going to blow a gasket though. The aftermath is not going to be pretty.
3/4/2015 c20 catch39
Go Four! Loved this chapter. His Abnegation roots came in very handy in this case. He used guilt expertly as a tool to get Max to act as a good effective leader should.
Go Four! Loved this chapter. His Abnegation roots came in very handy in this case. He used guilt expertly as a tool to get Max to act as a good effective leader should.
3/4/2015 c19 catch39
Very Mushy, only what people here do in the Gondolas of the Ferris wheel was done on a platform. They're both also a little insane. Good thing there fictional.
Very Mushy, only what people here do in the Gondolas of the Ferris wheel was done on a platform. They're both also a little insane. Good thing there fictional.
3/4/2015 c18 catch39
Peter got his revenge out on someone. Clever plot twist where both Uriah and Tris are out of his reach.
Peter got his revenge out on someone. Clever plot twist where both Uriah and Tris are out of his reach.