for The Third Pedrad3/3/2015 c7 catch39
That was a very interesting and enjoyable chapter. Does Eric secretly like Tris and are his fights with her his perverse way of showing affection?
That was a very interesting and enjoyable chapter. Does Eric secretly like Tris and are his fights with her his perverse way of showing affection?
3/3/2015 c16 kristieb
I don't know if it matters, but I always forget to leave a review. I just can't wait to turn the paage and keep reading. That a good thing.
Keep up the good work.
I don't know if it matters, but I always forget to leave a review. I just can't wait to turn the paage and keep reading. That a good thing.
Keep up the good work.
3/3/2015 c15 kristieb
Lauren did a good job with showing Four how Zeke would react. I like how more personable Tris is making Four. Its good for him to be more...aproachable!
Lauren did a good job with showing Four how Zeke would react. I like how more personable Tris is making Four. Its good for him to be more...aproachable!
3/3/2015 c12 kristieb
This whole chapter makes me smile.
I love your writing style. Its so different than others I've read.
Keep up the good work.
This whole chapter makes me smile.
I love your writing style. Its so different than others I've read.
Keep up the good work.
3/3/2015 c32 
6Windchimed
Ah, poor, drunk Zeke. Hopefully, they didn't say anything that was overheard or recorded by the cameras!
6WindchimedAh, poor, drunk Zeke. Hopefully, they didn't say anything that was overheard or recorded by the cameras!
3/3/2015 c32 kim4trisntobias4ever
Great chapter poor zeke worried over lady zeke! Can't wait to find out what happens.
Great chapter poor zeke worried over lady zeke! Can't wait to find out what happens.
3/3/2015 c32 kristieb
Amar is very level headed. Even though he's worried too. But the level of Zeke's worry is primal. For his family.
Zeke needs to go back to Shauna, lose himself in her, then let her help him get ready for what has to be done.
Amar will probably end up at Hana's for the night.
Tobias will go find Tris and want to stay with her for the night.
Yeah, somebody may get hurt, but don't lose any of the core characters. Not yet. Let them fight for good, celebrate afterwards and find new meanings to somethings.
Great job.
Amar is very level headed. Even though he's worried too. But the level of Zeke's worry is primal. For his family.
Zeke needs to go back to Shauna, lose himself in her, then let her help him get ready for what has to be done.
Amar will probably end up at Hana's for the night.
Tobias will go find Tris and want to stay with her for the night.
Yeah, somebody may get hurt, but don't lose any of the core characters. Not yet. Let them fight for good, celebrate afterwards and find new meanings to somethings.
Great job.
3/3/2015 c5 catch39
Amar is a trainer, big brother and counselor all rolled into one for both Tris and Four. Enjoyed reading about him. Thanks.
Amar is a trainer, big brother and counselor all rolled into one for both Tris and Four. Enjoyed reading about him. Thanks.
3/3/2015 c32 Castro05
Oh man! This is getting so good! Man I missed this story. I'm going to go back and re read it. Can I ask when you update to the action, you do it all at once? I don't think I'll be able to stand cliffhangers! Thanks!
Oh man! This is getting so good! Man I missed this story. I'm going to go back and re read it. Can I ask when you update to the action, you do it all at once? I don't think I'll be able to stand cliffhangers! Thanks!
3/3/2015 c32 8Savanah Rose
Nice chapter. I like Zeke's protective streak. And Four's honesty. Just DON'T KILL TRIS!
8Savanah RoseNice chapter. I like Zeke's protective streak. And Four's honesty. Just DON'T KILL TRIS!
3/3/2015 c32 FanFicFan2014
Ahhhh! Great chapter revealing Zeke's love for Tris and Amar talking sense to the both of them.
Ahhhh! Great chapter revealing Zeke's love for Tris and Amar talking sense to the both of them.