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6Divergent Kitty
Tobias shouldn't be worried, Tris is the strongest person he has ever known. :)
Divergent Kitty
6Divergent KittyTobias shouldn't be worried, Tris is the strongest person he has ever known. :)
Divergent Kitty
3/2/2015 c31 kristieb
Good chapter.
To be honest id forgotten how good your story is. I guess because of the updates. So...I'm going to do it justice and read the whole thing again!
Keep up the good work.
Good chapter.
To be honest id forgotten how good your story is. I guess because of the updates. So...I'm going to do it justice and read the whole thing again!
Keep up the good work.
3/2/2015 c31 Sawyerrr
Good chapter! I love how you convey the emotions of the different characters. Your detail is great. I feel like everything progresses at the right pace, and the story doesn't seem rushed at all. Thanks for the update!
Good chapter! I love how you convey the emotions of the different characters. Your detail is great. I feel like everything progresses at the right pace, and the story doesn't seem rushed at all. Thanks for the update!
3/2/2015 c31 Castro05
I was sooo happy to see this update. Please continue update! I love this story!
I was sooo happy to see this update. Please continue update! I love this story!
3/2/2015 c3 catch39
Intresting conversation dynamic, they both hint at feelings towards one another and then dismiss it as "couldn't possibly mean that". Liked it a lot.
Intresting conversation dynamic, they both hint at feelings towards one another and then dismiss it as "couldn't possibly mean that". Liked it a lot.
3/2/2015 c1 catch39
Liked it. Really appreciate that it's well written and a unique perspective Tris being a dauntless already.
Liked it. Really appreciate that it's well written and a unique perspective Tris being a dauntless already.
3/2/2015 c31 8Savanah Rose
Glad to have you back. I've missed this story. Good chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next.
8Savanah RoseGlad to have you back. I've missed this story. Good chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next.