for The Third Pedrad1/16/2015 c18 Grace
NO! WHY YOU NO KISS?
NO! WHY YOU NO KISS?
1/16/2015 c30 kristieb
I just want to say Great Story!
Its original and as far as I know...one of a kind.
I'm the type of reader that if a story is good, I can't put it down. Which I only did twice: to have a nap then to go to work today (well yesterday).
Can't wait for the next chapter.
I just want to say Great Story!
Its original and as far as I know...one of a kind.
I'm the type of reader that if a story is good, I can't put it down. Which I only did twice: to have a nap then to go to work today (well yesterday).
Can't wait for the next chapter.
1/14/2015 c30 Guest
loved the chapter, can't wait for the next one..
loved the chapter, can't wait for the next one..
1/13/2015 c30 s
gah! This was so good! Please update soon! I can't wait for more!
gah! This was so good! Please update soon! I can't wait for more!
1/13/2015 c30 Guest
THANK YOU!
THANK YOU!
1/14/2015 c30 
6iamkatrina
Amat is probably one of my favorite characters. He's amazing, please don't kill him. I love this story so much, it's literally one of my favorite things I've ever read. Ugh. It's so amazing, please update. When saw that you update I literally got so excited:)
6iamkatrinaAmat is probably one of my favorite characters. He's amazing, please don't kill him. I love this story so much, it's literally one of my favorite things I've ever read. Ugh. It's so amazing, please update. When saw that you update I literally got so excited:)
1/14/2015 c30 Zamilovany
So happy you updated! Great chapter I liked seeing Zeke stand up for Tris and also how over protective he is of her! Love Amar always the word of reason!
So happy you updated! Great chapter I liked seeing Zeke stand up for Tris and also how over protective he is of her! Love Amar always the word of reason!
1/14/2015 c30 Deleted user 195ver83o
Is Eric really done and over with Tris? Because I don't think so...
Is Eric really done and over with Tris? Because I don't think so...
1/14/2015 c30 Mrsaranha
Wow so worth the wait I love Amar and zekes point of views! Please update soon I'm not sure I can wait again!
Wow so worth the wait I love Amar and zekes point of views! Please update soon I'm not sure I can wait again!