for The Third Pedrad11/16/2014 c18 Guest
This is amazing! Please update soon! Love this!
This is amazing! Please update soon! Love this!
11/16/2014 c24 LoveDauntless
PLEASE UPDATE! THIS STORY IS AMAZING
PLEASE UPDATE! THIS STORY IS AMAZING
11/17/2014 c25 Deleted user 195ver83o
The twist of plans are excellent. It always amazes me how you manage to twist everything yet make everything so much the same. Keep on writing!
The twist of plans are excellent. It always amazes me how you manage to twist everything yet make everything so much the same. Keep on writing!
11/17/2014 c25 
28cjgwilliams
Okay, I totally did a happy dance when I saw the new chapter announcement in my email and this chapter did not disappoint! Oh I can't WAIT for the next one! :-)
28cjgwilliamsOkay, I totally did a happy dance when I saw the new chapter announcement in my email and this chapter did not disappoint! Oh I can't WAIT for the next one! :-)
11/17/2014 c25 7purplestar613
ermhgerd... i loved then, i love it now, i'm definitely staying with you and seeing this thing through to the end. Love love love!
7purplestar613ermhgerd... i loved then, i love it now, i'm definitely staying with you and seeing this thing through to the end. Love love love!
11/17/2014 c25 6Divergent Kitty
Oh my gosh. One of my absolute favourite scenes in Divergent, when Tris gets kidnapped and Tobias saves her! :3
Divergent Kitty
6Divergent KittyOh my gosh. One of my absolute favourite scenes in Divergent, when Tris gets kidnapped and Tobias saves her! :3
Divergent Kitty
11/17/2014 c25 8Savanah Rose
Anytime I get an update on this story I find myself looking for a chance to get caught up. I love how you have kept the story and yet changed it. You manage to get all the favorite parts in there without it just seeming to be repetitive from the original.
Keep writing! I'm waiting to see Zeke's reaction!
8Savanah RoseAnytime I get an update on this story I find myself looking for a chance to get caught up. I love how you have kept the story and yet changed it. You manage to get all the favorite parts in there without it just seeming to be repetitive from the original.
Keep writing! I'm waiting to see Zeke's reaction!
11/17/2014 c25 1Larona Joseph
Hey! I like the way your story is going. And you've turned around all the most exciting elements of VRoths story and re-woven them very well to flow of your story too. Looking forward to more updates. ( and some more romance and stuff to ;D)
1Larona JosephHey! I like the way your story is going. And you've turned around all the most exciting elements of VRoths story and re-woven them very well to flow of your story too. Looking forward to more updates. ( and some more romance and stuff to ;D)