
11/17/2014 c12 Sora
This was a good story. Thank you for sharing. I just wanted to point out a few things. The first thing is, obviously the spelling and grammar. If you have a hard time with the grammar, at least work on the spelling. More with the spelling of the character's names. Second, because this story was really good, you could have made this one longer. You could have worked your way up to telling each character about Draco. It would have been nice to read about Draco dealing with seeing his friends from Harry's POV. And finally, no offence but you made too big a deal with Draco and Harry calling each other by their first names. It's ok to point it out once it twice, but not too many times. Otherwise it was a nice story.
This was a good story. Thank you for sharing. I just wanted to point out a few things. The first thing is, obviously the spelling and grammar. If you have a hard time with the grammar, at least work on the spelling. More with the spelling of the character's names. Second, because this story was really good, you could have made this one longer. You could have worked your way up to telling each character about Draco. It would have been nice to read about Draco dealing with seeing his friends from Harry's POV. And finally, no offence but you made too big a deal with Draco and Harry calling each other by their first names. It's ok to point it out once it twice, but not too many times. Otherwise it was a nice story.
10/8/2014 c1 DogStar13
Actually, I don't think Lucius would really kill the only heir to the Malfoys. Also, there would be suspicion and stuff.
Actually, I don't think Lucius would really kill the only heir to the Malfoys. Also, there would be suspicion and stuff.
10/7/2014 c6
3HowlingRain
Found your story today and I really like it so far! I'm excited to see how they're going to plot to bring Draco back. Looking forward to the next chapter! :)

Found your story today and I really like it so far! I'm excited to see how they're going to plot to bring Draco back. Looking forward to the next chapter! :)