for Junichi's Brain Poop12/5/2014 c1 I am the Color of Boom
Ahahahahaha! Fantastic. You have such writing skills to be envied. I loved this. The ebb and flow of your writing matching spot on the emotions, and your description, it was amazing. There were no odd or unfitting phrasing that detracted from the scene, but it all just supported and added to it exactly how it should, and it all clicked beautifully. And it is really hard to do a cut-out scene and make it feel complete, but you really rounded it out nicely. Great job! I really enjoyed this!
Ahahahahaha! Fantastic. You have such writing skills to be envied. I loved this. The ebb and flow of your writing matching spot on the emotions, and your description, it was amazing. There were no odd or unfitting phrasing that detracted from the scene, but it all just supported and added to it exactly how it should, and it all clicked beautifully. And it is really hard to do a cut-out scene and make it feel complete, but you really rounded it out nicely. Great job! I really enjoyed this!
11/3/2014 c1 Noxi
You are one lucky person for deciding to start and end this snippet the way you did. Anything more, a little more of their story and a little more of your amazing ability of characterization and it would be Lethal all over again for me. I can't even comprehend how you can just decide to write a few lines and kick straight (there's a word we don't like :D ) into my feels.
Can I just say how much I love this 'non finished' activity? It feels like a glimpse into what's happening in your mind when you're not thinking about the big*cough*FMM*cough* story.
You are one lucky person for deciding to start and end this snippet the way you did. Anything more, a little more of their story and a little more of your amazing ability of characterization and it would be Lethal all over again for me. I can't even comprehend how you can just decide to write a few lines and kick straight (there's a word we don't like :D ) into my feels.
Can I just say how much I love this 'non finished' activity? It feels like a glimpse into what's happening in your mind when you're not thinking about the big*cough*FMM*cough* story.
10/27/2014 c1 scheun2100
This could turn out to be something really good. With Ichigo as a ghost of his former self and a Grimmjow back from the dead. Just an idea if you need somethhing when if you decide to go on with this! Love it so far!
This could turn out to be something really good. With Ichigo as a ghost of his former self and a Grimmjow back from the dead. Just an idea if you need somethhing when if you decide to go on with this! Love it so far!
10/17/2014 c1 a sinner's whisper
Oh please don't keep this a oneshot, I would love to read more of it!
Oh please don't keep this a oneshot, I would love to read more of it!
10/5/2014 c1 Doni
Oh, that's damn good, whether it stays this one-shot or gets expanded upon in the future. It felt like a very real reaction on Ichigo's part. Nicely done.
Oh, that's damn good, whether it stays this one-shot or gets expanded upon in the future. It felt like a very real reaction on Ichigo's part. Nicely done.
10/5/2014 c1 
3grimmjowsucks
Does that mean grim is alive? .-. Either way seeing something new from you always makes me smile and yeah c: I look forward to more
3grimmjowsucksDoes that mean grim is alive? .-. Either way seeing something new from you always makes me smile and yeah c: I look forward to more
10/5/2014 c1 KenzieFF
I really, really, really wish this had a continuation. It's so flawless and just... great! Jeeze, you excel at everything you write, Junichi, even at your brain poop! What's up with that? Loved it. Ten outta ten.
Do you have any more brain poop?
Kenzie
I really, really, really wish this had a continuation. It's so flawless and just... great! Jeeze, you excel at everything you write, Junichi, even at your brain poop! What's up with that? Loved it. Ten outta ten.
Do you have any more brain poop?
Kenzie