
10/9/2014 c1
202Kyuubi16
You have some slight punctuation errors, if you were to fix those up then the story will be perfect. One in the middle and two towards the end so if you add some periods they will be fixed.

You have some slight punctuation errors, if you were to fix those up then the story will be perfect. One in the middle and two towards the end so if you add some periods they will be fixed.
10/5/2014 c1
1Elder Sibling
I really hope there would be a NaruTema fic with actual plotline, not just lemon.

I really hope there would be a NaruTema fic with actual plotline, not just lemon.