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1/14/2019 c1 xxjaelee
It's interesting but too bad you don't update this anymore
10/29/2018 c1 2Shadowing
LOVE IT!
8/28/2016 c1 2Hyakuma
Please update? Please?

TT

Don't tease us readers like this author-san
3/15/2016 c1 7SakuraLuck
Wait so- did she ever travel? The world and such? Maybe go to space? Learn politics? Go to the mafia world? I mean, she's had 15 lives, she's bound to have met Reborn (or some other mafia) somewhere...?
PLEASE UPDATE SOOOn!
12/16/2015 c1 Crystal Blue Butterfly
Oh my, good first chapter!
9/25/2015 c1 Nicole NightLock
Please update soon!~ Byakuran X Hisako
10/28/2014 c1 Yenaya
Seems interesting.
10/11/2014 c1 Not-Gonna-Update
Mm... it's cute that Haru adores her older sister and it's sweet that Hisako cares for her and their mom.
So far, this fanfic has been really fun to read. I like it.
10/8/2014 c1 3angelacorus
Que lindo pero dime cuantos aƱos es mayor Hisako de Haru?
10/8/2014 c1 5Spark of the forgotten
I like this! I wonder where it will go...
10/7/2014 c1 Guest
Big problem I see here. Ever hear of 'show, don't tell?' There's a lot of 'telling' going on here, especially in the intro of the story. Having an OC as Haru's sister is an interesting concept though, so there's definitely potential here.

... And this being reborn multiple times thing. It doesn't look like it's had that much of an effect on Hisako, which is unrealistic. And no offense or anything, but the die-and-be-reborn-in-a-loop thing kind of seems copied from Singular Poisonous Ashes' "Fifth time's the charm" or XxZuiliu's "Onwards Till Dawn." Not trying to accuse you of anything here, if you came up with the idea on your own. Just making an observation here.

Well, good luck continuing the story...?

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