for At His Mercy5/26/2020 c1 Guest
I hate u for making such a great story a one shot
I hate u for making such a great story a one shot
8/3/2017 c1 
1GreyRey
I really, really like this idea! Combining snk and Naruto (not in a crossover way) always seemed like something super cool and since I didn't find any fanfics and don't have the slightest bit of time to write one I kinda forgot about it... but I stumbled upon this and it's really great! hope to see this continued on day
1GreyReyI really, really like this idea! Combining snk and Naruto (not in a crossover way) always seemed like something super cool and since I didn't find any fanfics and don't have the slightest bit of time to write one I kinda forgot about it... but I stumbled upon this and it's really great! hope to see this continued on day
3/20/2015 c1 2IsseyRiot
Ohhh I'm so looking forward for this!
I love how you've started it. And what Ino said about the was Sasuke treats Sakura.
I hope to get a glimpse of his side of the story :P
Please continue :)))))
2IsseyRiotOhhh I'm so looking forward for this!
I love how you've started it. And what Ino said about the was Sasuke treats Sakura.
I hope to get a glimpse of his side of the story :P
Please continue :)))))
3/16/2015 c1 CuteAnimeLover
Love this story. Is it a oneshot or are you writhing another chapter?
If so I hope that you update soon, please. )
Love this story. Is it a oneshot or are you writhing another chapter?
If so I hope that you update soon, please. )
1/19/2015 c1 49KenRik
omygosh this is so hawt please do continue! the writing could be better as well as the dialogue. instead of simply writing down what happened, maybe show us by actually writing the scenes rather than giving an overall view.
hopefully there'll be more character to ino than some mindless cheerleader for the lovelife of sakura, give her her own sassy life.
i'm looking forward to the titan kills and a possessive, jealous, subtly sweet sasuke. and give sakura more depth as a character. here sakura seems to be more of sasha than sakura. and we know that sakura is more than that. she's caring, smart, ambitious, a doctor, super strong, kind, etc.
also, here's to hoping for a love triangle. maybe itachi might show up or something? ahihihi
anyway promising story! hope you update soon. :)
49KenRikomygosh this is so hawt please do continue! the writing could be better as well as the dialogue. instead of simply writing down what happened, maybe show us by actually writing the scenes rather than giving an overall view.
hopefully there'll be more character to ino than some mindless cheerleader for the lovelife of sakura, give her her own sassy life.
i'm looking forward to the titan kills and a possessive, jealous, subtly sweet sasuke. and give sakura more depth as a character. here sakura seems to be more of sasha than sakura. and we know that sakura is more than that. she's caring, smart, ambitious, a doctor, super strong, kind, etc.
also, here's to hoping for a love triangle. maybe itachi might show up or something? ahihihi
anyway promising story! hope you update soon. :)
12/29/2014 c1 Guest
update soon please
update soon please
12/14/2014 c1 49Sasukeluva 4eva
This has a lot of potential, especially since it combines my two favourite manga universes together (or at least the characters have been replaced in the SNK universe). **
I can't wait to see where you're going with this one.
There are a few grammatical nuances that could do with some work, such as utilising the comma in inappropriate places (or not at all sometimes), but other than that, the stylistic flair of your writing is quite pleasant to read. (:
Looking forward to your next update.
Kindest regards,
Rin
49Sasukeluva 4evaThis has a lot of potential, especially since it combines my two favourite manga universes together (or at least the characters have been replaced in the SNK universe). **
I can't wait to see where you're going with this one.
There are a few grammatical nuances that could do with some work, such as utilising the comma in inappropriate places (or not at all sometimes), but other than that, the stylistic flair of your writing is quite pleasant to read. (:
Looking forward to your next update.
Kindest regards,
Rin
12/11/2014 c1 Guest
love this. Please update pretty please
love this. Please update pretty please
10/13/2014 c1 9RobinSparkelz
I absolutely adore this, and continue, continue, continue it please. SasuSaku military AU is really one of my favourite type of themes and your approach is Amazing :D
9RobinSparkelzI absolutely adore this, and continue, continue, continue it please. SasuSaku military AU is really one of my favourite type of themes and your approach is Amazing :D
10/9/2014 c1 Guest
Im actually not familiar with SNK, might be planning to if I have enough time. I like this story so far nontheless, really intriguing first chappy :)
Im actually not familiar with SNK, might be planning to if I have enough time. I like this story so far nontheless, really intriguing first chappy :)
10/9/2014 c1 3Yamora Love n Friendship
This is really good so far :) can't wait to read what is going to happen next update soon :D
3Yamora Love n FriendshipThis is really good so far :) can't wait to read what is going to happen next update soon :D