for Contact Light12/11/2014 c3 
1LogicalFallacies
Ok so having multiple story lines running parallel is a good way to build suspense, you can build one story line towards climax and then cut off with a cliffhanger and go work on one of the others. But three story lines all with shepard att different points in time plus a few others for good measure? It's starting to feel like I'm going to need to sit down and take notes if I want to make any sense of this.
1LogicalFallaciesOk so having multiple story lines running parallel is a good way to build suspense, you can build one story line towards climax and then cut off with a cliffhanger and go work on one of the others. But three story lines all with shepard att different points in time plus a few others for good measure? It's starting to feel like I'm going to need to sit down and take notes if I want to make any sense of this.
10/24/2014 c4 Lobo
I recommend to read: Over analysis. The author is call EgotisticalIndustries, its explain about the true potential of element zero. If you understand scientific stuff eh?
I recommend to read: Over analysis. The author is call EgotisticalIndustries, its explain about the true potential of element zero. If you understand scientific stuff eh?
10/15/2014 c3 agfp9guf92oihtnqyg08epuwjsigdo
Interesting take, I might say, on the idea of space socialism. They appear to be more of a mid-19th century form of utopian French socialism, which again is neat. I like also the ironic parallel of the US collapsing in the early 1990's.
I want to see how this pans out.
Only criticisms are that this is in general too short. And, of course, the ever-present Cult of FemShepTM that seems to infect all fanfics.
Interesting take, I might say, on the idea of space socialism. They appear to be more of a mid-19th century form of utopian French socialism, which again is neat. I like also the ironic parallel of the US collapsing in the early 1990's.
I want to see how this pans out.
Only criticisms are that this is in general too short. And, of course, the ever-present Cult of FemShepTM that seems to infect all fanfics.
10/14/2014 c1 josh.rhodes.7712
Like at first then fuck cant read it sorry im from the usa so yeah but its great to see something new
Like at first then fuck cant read it sorry im from the usa so yeah but its great to see something new
10/12/2014 c1 anonymous
Why you got such a problem with the US?
Why you got such a problem with the US?
10/11/2014 c1 Guest
I like this, no America, using European principals and quite frankly European intelligence... What could become? An intelligent stomp fic? Would make a change!
Terran-Terror
I like this, no America, using European principals and quite frankly European intelligence... What could become? An intelligent stomp fic? Would make a change!
Terran-Terror