
11/17/2014 c1 Forever121
I like this a little bit but it does have some mistakes made but I won't push into it until i see the next chapter. I like Miku's bad girl apperarence! It makes her look more cute rather than having the cliche version of her sweet side. It was really a job well done. Kaito on the other hand was confusing. First he's weird then acts like a player then goes to be nice and back to a weirdo? That doesn't really make sence but I'll leave it to you to explain this to me. Another thing I like is Len and Rin's friend/enemy beginning relationship. It's literally so adorable and I like the simile you used of the devil parada stuff because it made me laugh a bit but it was still good. I will follow it for now until I see that I can favorite but you're going to have to update this story before I do that but this story was very interesting. Keep Working!
I like this a little bit but it does have some mistakes made but I won't push into it until i see the next chapter. I like Miku's bad girl apperarence! It makes her look more cute rather than having the cliche version of her sweet side. It was really a job well done. Kaito on the other hand was confusing. First he's weird then acts like a player then goes to be nice and back to a weirdo? That doesn't really make sence but I'll leave it to you to explain this to me. Another thing I like is Len and Rin's friend/enemy beginning relationship. It's literally so adorable and I like the simile you used of the devil parada stuff because it made me laugh a bit but it was still good. I will follow it for now until I see that I can favorite but you're going to have to update this story before I do that but this story was very interesting. Keep Working!
10/13/2014 c1 Guest
Sooo first of you have to know that I'm a boy and I usually don't read romance storys or watch these kind of animes but anyway I'll try to review this btw I'm not from any english speaking country so I'm sort of a self taught speaker cause that what we learn in class is to less and that's why I can't describe my thaughts so well.
I really do like the names miku and everyone elses and they suited everyone too but in my opinion there are 2 mini is clearly a russian name and knowing them no russian guy would allow such behaviour neither in class or in private Kaito:Kaito Shino sounds so uncreative for a important person in a story but maybe I only have this feeling because of knowing Kaito from HxH and Shino from Naruto but to the characters themselfes...I had the feeling miku has a strong will and knows how to deal with everyone she likes and dislikes but suddenly when the kaito appeared she was confused and didn't know how to behave and what to kaito...he sounds kawai and so but at first he was a shy new guy at school and at the eating hall he turned into a close friend of everyone,kissed miku and interfierred in a fight or something like these moments when miku had her dreams...I reaaally liked them probalby because I could imagine these parts so well in an anime in the middle part These moments were missing but at the end of the story it finally came and this thing and 'I am gonna fix you' was veryy cool.
Yeah all in all I liked it altough not reading such stuff and yeah don't take my review too seriosly cause I have the feeling that I was to keep on writing and have fun:)
And btw I am at instagram:)
Sooo first of you have to know that I'm a boy and I usually don't read romance storys or watch these kind of animes but anyway I'll try to review this btw I'm not from any english speaking country so I'm sort of a self taught speaker cause that what we learn in class is to less and that's why I can't describe my thaughts so well.
I really do like the names miku and everyone elses and they suited everyone too but in my opinion there are 2 mini is clearly a russian name and knowing them no russian guy would allow such behaviour neither in class or in private Kaito:Kaito Shino sounds so uncreative for a important person in a story but maybe I only have this feeling because of knowing Kaito from HxH and Shino from Naruto but to the characters themselfes...I had the feeling miku has a strong will and knows how to deal with everyone she likes and dislikes but suddenly when the kaito appeared she was confused and didn't know how to behave and what to kaito...he sounds kawai and so but at first he was a shy new guy at school and at the eating hall he turned into a close friend of everyone,kissed miku and interfierred in a fight or something like these moments when miku had her dreams...I reaaally liked them probalby because I could imagine these parts so well in an anime in the middle part These moments were missing but at the end of the story it finally came and this thing and 'I am gonna fix you' was veryy cool.
Yeah all in all I liked it altough not reading such stuff and yeah don't take my review too seriosly cause I have the feeling that I was to keep on writing and have fun:)
And btw I am at instagram:)
10/13/2014 c1
1Kaleidoscopic Dragon
I like the story, but I'm seriously confused. At the beginning, who was the one who crashed against Miku? I supposed it was Kaito, but then he appeared and was a jerk(just my opinion) with her. Then again he was kinda shy and hugged her and all... Gah. I'm a bit slow with that kind of things. Second, Rin and Len meeting... I guess in the next chapters you will say why they have met before? This is not a hater review, it's just to ask for the things that confuse me. Don't feel bad if it feels like that because that's not my intention :)

I like the story, but I'm seriously confused. At the beginning, who was the one who crashed against Miku? I supposed it was Kaito, but then he appeared and was a jerk(just my opinion) with her. Then again he was kinda shy and hugged her and all... Gah. I'm a bit slow with that kind of things. Second, Rin and Len meeting... I guess in the next chapters you will say why they have met before? This is not a hater review, it's just to ask for the things that confuse me. Don't feel bad if it feels like that because that's not my intention :)
10/13/2014 c1 Rosie-Kpop-Love
I really like Miku's personality and also Kaito's haha its interesting and slightly fresh for Miku to play a bad girl not an innocent angel or a bitch haha Idk I just found this story was a efreshing read
Keep working hard
Rosie xxxx
I really like Miku's personality and also Kaito's haha its interesting and slightly fresh for Miku to play a bad girl not an innocent angel or a bitch haha Idk I just found this story was a efreshing read
Keep working hard
Rosie xxxx
10/12/2014 c1 ForeveraVocaloid
YES I LOVED IT! Please write more!
YES I LOVED IT! Please write more!