for Recovery5/10/2016 c1 
3dewa95
Update soon please.
Loved the start... but this whole thing has a oneshot feel to it. I mean Sasuke was not okay at first, mending next and at last he seemed finally okay... so is there a new chapter? or is it a Oneshot?
3dewa95Update soon please.
Loved the start... but this whole thing has a oneshot feel to it. I mean Sasuke was not okay at first, mending next and at last he seemed finally okay... so is there a new chapter? or is it a Oneshot?
2/18/2015 c1 62mamika
ah. first I have to say that I grimaced when reading that naruto and Sasuke were an item. shocking.
I liked how first thing that Sasuke said was a joke. and he has always had a good humor. hard to see sometimes but there.
(btw, I'm writing this while I read. that's my usual style. a bit more time consuming...) I am kinda glad that there hasn't been told what Sasuke really had to do. but I guess I can guess. and their first match was interesting. silly itachi thinking that Sasuke wouldn't have developed.
ooh! what's going on? why does no one else see that Sasuke is not okay? thank god he has itachi to look after him.
poor Sasuke. having nightmares :(
*laughter* that's so funny! they make out! well, I honestly figured it was going to happen when itachi's heart skipped a beat when Sasuke came to his door but... wow. that I did not see coming. but I can see how it could work.
shisui is funny too. liked the way he described itachi's and Sasuke's relationship flirty n.n
almost didn't flinch...well. I guess that is progress. I love it how you make sasuke so strong, barely messing up a shirt in chunnin exams. kudos.
aww, they are cute together. and maybe it's okay since it really is Sasuke starting it all. who could blame Itachi for not being able to resist him?
is he legal... shisui really is really funny guy. nicely thought of him. kind of Sasuke to pack treats for itachi. it's good to see him feel bad about doing stuff like that with his brother. makes it seem realistic because I don't think that situation would be as easy as just doing in real life.
*chuckle* kicked puppy look... I can't even imagine that! XD
shisui's impression of itachi is really good.
nasty. poor Sasuke, having to fight with someone as crazed as that. I mean it must not have been nice to kill him like that. no matter how hard core he is. but yay, Sasuke is so cool when he fights! easy victories!
I knew it. killing is not nice to him. and who wouldn't hate paperwork. duh. hmm. they are clearly going bolder. well, not like itachi has any saying about it... I hope Sasuke gets better.
like I said, shisui is funny. Kakashi's porn addicition... that was so amusing! (what, wait, does Kakashi have a crush on Sasuke too? o.o (that would be cute too...they would make a great couple..)
I hate spiders. shisui makes a good point there. that would be horrible. so that's how danzo is taken care of. good riddens.
is not worried that Sasuke gets killed...well, a little bit. heheh :D
well, MNES does fit Sasuke. he likes protecting things he like (his bro...) what? they are both engaged? holy mother of fuck. that's bad.
*laughter* not a morning person? and called little monster? he seriously must be hard to wake up XD good dad they have, looking after them but not bothering them.
you forgot to mention that Kakashi is working there too! that might comfort Sasuke a bit. (am not fantasizing here..)
cute. taking cover in his brothers office. don't tire yourself out Sasuke!
*dying of laughter* that ending was the best! for a split second I froze that no way, it's the kid sister going there but thank gods it was just shisui. and then I laughed so hard.
thanks for the fic!
62mamikaah. first I have to say that I grimaced when reading that naruto and Sasuke were an item. shocking.
I liked how first thing that Sasuke said was a joke. and he has always had a good humor. hard to see sometimes but there.
(btw, I'm writing this while I read. that's my usual style. a bit more time consuming...) I am kinda glad that there hasn't been told what Sasuke really had to do. but I guess I can guess. and their first match was interesting. silly itachi thinking that Sasuke wouldn't have developed.
ooh! what's going on? why does no one else see that Sasuke is not okay? thank god he has itachi to look after him.
poor Sasuke. having nightmares :(
*laughter* that's so funny! they make out! well, I honestly figured it was going to happen when itachi's heart skipped a beat when Sasuke came to his door but... wow. that I did not see coming. but I can see how it could work.
shisui is funny too. liked the way he described itachi's and Sasuke's relationship flirty n.n
almost didn't flinch...well. I guess that is progress. I love it how you make sasuke so strong, barely messing up a shirt in chunnin exams. kudos.
aww, they are cute together. and maybe it's okay since it really is Sasuke starting it all. who could blame Itachi for not being able to resist him?
is he legal... shisui really is really funny guy. nicely thought of him. kind of Sasuke to pack treats for itachi. it's good to see him feel bad about doing stuff like that with his brother. makes it seem realistic because I don't think that situation would be as easy as just doing in real life.
*chuckle* kicked puppy look... I can't even imagine that! XD
shisui's impression of itachi is really good.
nasty. poor Sasuke, having to fight with someone as crazed as that. I mean it must not have been nice to kill him like that. no matter how hard core he is. but yay, Sasuke is so cool when he fights! easy victories!
I knew it. killing is not nice to him. and who wouldn't hate paperwork. duh. hmm. they are clearly going bolder. well, not like itachi has any saying about it... I hope Sasuke gets better.
like I said, shisui is funny. Kakashi's porn addicition... that was so amusing! (what, wait, does Kakashi have a crush on Sasuke too? o.o (that would be cute too...they would make a great couple..)
I hate spiders. shisui makes a good point there. that would be horrible. so that's how danzo is taken care of. good riddens.
is not worried that Sasuke gets killed...well, a little bit. heheh :D
well, MNES does fit Sasuke. he likes protecting things he like (his bro...) what? they are both engaged? holy mother of fuck. that's bad.
*laughter* not a morning person? and called little monster? he seriously must be hard to wake up XD good dad they have, looking after them but not bothering them.
you forgot to mention that Kakashi is working there too! that might comfort Sasuke a bit. (am not fantasizing here..)
cute. taking cover in his brothers office. don't tire yourself out Sasuke!
*dying of laughter* that ending was the best! for a split second I froze that no way, it's the kid sister going there but thank gods it was just shisui. and then I laughed so hard.
thanks for the fic!
11/13/2014 c1 In Memory Of Yesterday
I loved it. Especially that Sasuke had to go through the chuunin exam again, that was hilarious. Some spelling errors hee and there, but the story made up for it. Great job!
I loved it. Especially that Sasuke had to go through the chuunin exam again, that was hilarious. Some spelling errors hee and there, but the story made up for it. Great job!
10/31/2014 c1 7LittleLunaChan
Interesting so far but you should consider getting a beta, there are quite a few grammar mistakes/typo's which is a shame since the rest of the story is good so far. For exmaple it's "Sharingan" not "Sharingon". It's "straight through his Eiji's" instead of "strait". It's "he wants to keep himself busy/he wants to stay busy" but not "he wants to keep busy".
Idk about "being arranged (you wrote arraigned the first time)" but I think the word you're looking for is "engaged/betrothed". Sasuke's face was "red" not "read" (red is the color, read is reading). "Black mal" should be "black mail". Sometimes the present/past/future tenses you use don't match up with the rest of the sentence and please learn the difference between "your" (meaning possession) and "you're - you are". Anyway you get my point. It's very distracting from the story so please find a nice beta who can help you with these small typo's/grammar mistakes. I hope I don't come over as too harsh or anything but it's a shame when a nice story/chapter has so many small mistakes which can easily be helped :)
7LittleLunaChanInteresting so far but you should consider getting a beta, there are quite a few grammar mistakes/typo's which is a shame since the rest of the story is good so far. For exmaple it's "Sharingan" not "Sharingon". It's "straight through his Eiji's" instead of "strait". It's "he wants to keep himself busy/he wants to stay busy" but not "he wants to keep busy".
Idk about "being arranged (you wrote arraigned the first time)" but I think the word you're looking for is "engaged/betrothed". Sasuke's face was "red" not "read" (red is the color, read is reading). "Black mal" should be "black mail". Sometimes the present/past/future tenses you use don't match up with the rest of the sentence and please learn the difference between "your" (meaning possession) and "you're - you are". Anyway you get my point. It's very distracting from the story so please find a nice beta who can help you with these small typo's/grammar mistakes. I hope I don't come over as too harsh or anything but it's a shame when a nice story/chapter has so many small mistakes which can easily be helped :)
10/21/2014 c1 BelleArcher
Great first chapter! Really looking forward to more. Quality Ita/Sasu that shows both their damage and devotion is rare. Thanks for writing. :)
Great first chapter! Really looking forward to more. Quality Ita/Sasu that shows both their damage and devotion is rare. Thanks for writing. :)