for The Cherry Trees6/14/2021 c31 popularitydies
... i loved the book till chapter 29.. and i hated the ending. but i will say your writing style is amazing and it was worth the read.
... i loved the book till chapter 29.. and i hated the ending. but i will say your writing style is amazing and it was worth the read.
10/2/2020 c31 sctavis
So so so so well written. It ends as it begins. A third chance you say? Amazing.
So so so so well written. It ends as it begins. A third chance you say? Amazing.
3/22/2020 c2 
8justfandomwritings
I’ve tried and failed to read this story so many times because I can never get past the line “she finished her medical degree at 22.”
Sure, you want your character to appear smart, but this just went too far. It telegraphs to me that the character HAD to be 24 for some reason, no doubt for self-insert/relatability by author or whoever the story is intended for. It would’ve been infinitely more reasonable and probably wouldn’t have hurt the story at all if the character was a little older.
For example, to become a doctor you have to go through undergrad, med school, and residency. Undergrad is 4 years; med school is 4 years, residency is at minimum 3. That’s 11 years. I suppose the undergrad could be completed in under that but the other two you literally can’t speed up, so what’s really being implied is that she started college at 11 and med school at 15 (pretty sure that wouldn’t be allowed). Even if it were, people of that level of IQ and the level of social isolation required to complete this insane timeline would have serious difficulties that wouldn’t be addressed in this story.
I understand that the premise was to make the character intelligent, but a simple google search would show what an utterly ludicrous timeline that would be. While this is fiction and some disbelief should be suspended, referencing real world things like that are really poignant for some readers like me because they give a real world guideline of how smart/successful a character is supposed to be. And this one just went way too far.
8justfandomwritingsI’ve tried and failed to read this story so many times because I can never get past the line “she finished her medical degree at 22.”
Sure, you want your character to appear smart, but this just went too far. It telegraphs to me that the character HAD to be 24 for some reason, no doubt for self-insert/relatability by author or whoever the story is intended for. It would’ve been infinitely more reasonable and probably wouldn’t have hurt the story at all if the character was a little older.
For example, to become a doctor you have to go through undergrad, med school, and residency. Undergrad is 4 years; med school is 4 years, residency is at minimum 3. That’s 11 years. I suppose the undergrad could be completed in under that but the other two you literally can’t speed up, so what’s really being implied is that she started college at 11 and med school at 15 (pretty sure that wouldn’t be allowed). Even if it were, people of that level of IQ and the level of social isolation required to complete this insane timeline would have serious difficulties that wouldn’t be addressed in this story.
I understand that the premise was to make the character intelligent, but a simple google search would show what an utterly ludicrous timeline that would be. While this is fiction and some disbelief should be suspended, referencing real world things like that are really poignant for some readers like me because they give a real world guideline of how smart/successful a character is supposed to be. And this one just went way too far.
11/17/2019 c31 5Anneliese Bain
im not sure how i felt about the absolute ending. cause i dont understand why zeus sent them back but yet they have no memory of the fact that they had a purpose. And its a little unsettling that Anna is a child now. Something is unsettling about him helping to raise her then be intimate...
5Anneliese Bainim not sure how i felt about the absolute ending. cause i dont understand why zeus sent them back but yet they have no memory of the fact that they had a purpose. And its a little unsettling that Anna is a child now. Something is unsettling about him helping to raise her then be intimate...
10/30/2019 c13 2MiharuTousaka
I can have a purring and groping Marcus too?! Gimme gimme, please please please, my body is ready! XD
2MiharuTousakaI can have a purring and groping Marcus too?! Gimme gimme, please please please, my body is ready! XD
5/12/2019 c16 fmylifelol
I adore the small hints of dominance. I love when authors write relationships like that even if it's just slightly hinted at. I'm in a sub/dom relationship so it just makes me giddy to read those small hints of it. so thank you
I adore the small hints of dominance. I love when authors write relationships like that even if it's just slightly hinted at. I'm in a sub/dom relationship so it just makes me giddy to read those small hints of it. so thank you