
12/18/2017 c1 Guest
Edward is a bastard
Edward is a bastard
3/16/2017 c1 Solangelo Lover 292
If you get the chance, I would love to see how you continue this so please keep writing! _
If you get the chance, I would love to see how you continue this so please keep writing! _
11/18/2014 c1 RowanBronze
Hmmm... I don't what to say. But that she should have done something more vengeful, rather than harm herself.
Hmmm... I don't what to say. But that she should have done something more vengeful, rather than harm herself.
10/18/2014 c1 Guest
If she lives I'd like to hear more
If she lives I'd like to hear more
10/17/2014 c1
2Sunflower Fran
I knew she was attempting something ... had no idea it would be on stage.
Great start!

I knew she was attempting something ... had no idea it would be on stage.
Great start!
10/17/2014 c1 Kayanns
I think you should continue this ! I NEED to know what happens next and why it happened in the first place.
I think you should continue this ! I NEED to know what happens next and why it happened in the first place.
10/17/2014 c1 Guest
Very good.
A little melodramatic, I'd have preferred it was him that got cut, but maybe when you Carry on?
I don't like pathetic Bella generally speaking so as long as she mans up I'll go along for the ride.
Very good.
A little melodramatic, I'd have preferred it was him that got cut, but maybe when you Carry on?
I don't like pathetic Bella generally speaking so as long as she mans up I'll go along for the ride.