
1/14/2017 c4 Kveykvagarm
yah like Eragon's dragon riders, except they're soul bound in a different way
yah like Eragon's dragon riders, except they're soul bound in a different way
1/3/2015 c1 Arizena
I'm sorry to say this, but this story reeksamen of Mary-Sue. She's a dragon. She's the last of her kind.
Let me guess. That Legolas just looks at her with amazement. Seriously? And you are probably going to make her fall in love with Legolas really fast.
And why would the Three Hunters accept her so fast? Gimli's father had a fight with a dragon and Legolas and Aragorn (according to the last Hobbit movie Legolas was there and that Aragorn probably had heart of what happend in Esgaroth) Saw the destruction a dragon could make.
And lastly the only known being(s) in The Lord of the Rings that could communicate between minds is Galadriel and Elrond. And they bear Vilya and Nenya.
I'm sorry to say this, but this story reeksamen of Mary-Sue. She's a dragon. She's the last of her kind.
Let me guess. That Legolas just looks at her with amazement. Seriously? And you are probably going to make her fall in love with Legolas really fast.
And why would the Three Hunters accept her so fast? Gimli's father had a fight with a dragon and Legolas and Aragorn (according to the last Hobbit movie Legolas was there and that Aragorn probably had heart of what happend in Esgaroth) Saw the destruction a dragon could make.
And lastly the only known being(s) in The Lord of the Rings that could communicate between minds is Galadriel and Elrond. And they bear Vilya and Nenya.
12/30/2014 c15 hi
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS! WANT TO KNOW HOW THIS ENDS!1
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS! WANT TO KNOW HOW THIS ENDS!1
12/15/2014 c14 Guest
Please finish the story please
Please finish the story please
12/14/2014 c14 Guest
Please finish the story
Please finish the story
12/13/2014 c14 Guest
Finished the story please!
Finished the story please!
12/14/2014 c14 ChibiFelicia
I just found your story and I couldn't stop reading.
Your characters feel real and beleavable. As do the changes in the story.
I can't wait for your next update!
I just found your story and I couldn't stop reading.
Your characters feel real and beleavable. As do the changes in the story.
I can't wait for your next update!
12/8/2014 c7 SortingHat
Seeing the drinking game it appears Saruman was right that all they do is get drunk and go down with the dogs.
Seeing the drinking game it appears Saruman was right that all they do is get drunk and go down with the dogs.
12/8/2014 c5 SortingHat
Actually Gimili was right. How do they expect him to see properly?
Actually Gimili was right. How do they expect him to see properly?
12/8/2014 c3 SortingHat
Here's a friendly hint. You're OC actually could get away with killing Grima by saying to Gandalf that Grima had an unfortunate accident with some nasty Urks.
Here's a friendly hint. You're OC actually could get away with killing Grima by saying to Gandalf that Grima had an unfortunate accident with some nasty Urks.
12/8/2014 c13
5jessicaelvenprincess
Whyyyy did you end it thereeeeee ughh I hate cliffhangers so freaking much

Whyyyy did you end it thereeeeee ughh I hate cliffhangers so freaking much
12/7/2014 c12 jessicaelvenprincess
Well I'm glad they transferred the power so easily. And again, I love this story so much. It is more creative than the fanfics I have started. Keep writing quickly!
Well I'm glad they transferred the power so easily. And again, I love this story so much. It is more creative than the fanfics I have started. Keep writing quickly!