for Fa Awry3/14/2015 c9 
4quantumCellist
Dammit CJ, you're not allowed to make me ship ChoXGinny
*aggressive shipping*
Dammit.
4quantumCellistDammit CJ, you're not allowed to make me ship ChoXGinny
*aggressive shipping*
Dammit.
1/25/2015 c9 170A Sirius Crush On Moony
Hah, I loved this. The dialogue between Harry and Hermione was wonderful, and also I loved the little thoughts going on in Hermione's head. They made me laugh. You got them perfectly in-character, and it made me smile. I really enjoyed reading this.
170A Sirius Crush On MoonyHah, I loved this. The dialogue between Harry and Hermione was wonderful, and also I loved the little thoughts going on in Hermione's head. They made me laugh. You got them perfectly in-character, and it made me smile. I really enjoyed reading this.
12/17/2014 c8 A Sirius Crush On Moony
This was so sad! And to think that it goes through what happened to you when you came out makes it sadder, I'm sorry! Luckily, I got it quite easy when I came out. Anyway, I loved the creativity here. The way you make us believe that Cho likes Ginny, and then she doesn't... ahhh so heartbreaking! And you also used the emotional support prompt quite creatively too, since the two aren't even together. I loved it :)
This was so sad! And to think that it goes through what happened to you when you came out makes it sadder, I'm sorry! Luckily, I got it quite easy when I came out. Anyway, I loved the creativity here. The way you make us believe that Cho likes Ginny, and then she doesn't... ahhh so heartbreaking! And you also used the emotional support prompt quite creatively too, since the two aren't even together. I loved it :)
11/30/2014 c6 A Sirius Crush On Moony
Ah, this was lovely. I liked the idea of Cho having two mums. I don't read much about Cho and this was really really good. You definitely made good use of the prompt. I liked the whole bit where you mentioned that three weeks is like forever for an eleven year old haha. It's so true. You captured that perfectly. I also loved how she yelled "I'm going to Hogwarts!". I wonder who that boy was in the other window XD I enjoyed this a lot.
Ah, this was lovely. I liked the idea of Cho having two mums. I don't read much about Cho and this was really really good. You definitely made good use of the prompt. I liked the whole bit where you mentioned that three weeks is like forever for an eleven year old haha. It's so true. You captured that perfectly. I also loved how she yelled "I'm going to Hogwarts!". I wonder who that boy was in the other window XD I enjoyed this a lot.
11/18/2014 c5 A Sirius Crush On Moony
Oh, how I love Herbology-nerdy Neville. It made me laugh out loud when I read that he was saying that to a plant XD I think a good friendship is when two people can argue and insult each other. Too much pleasantness is so fake, so you really got it right. I loved the dialogue between them. I noticed a few grammatical errors, but nothing too big. Great work!
Oh, how I love Herbology-nerdy Neville. It made me laugh out loud when I read that he was saying that to a plant XD I think a good friendship is when two people can argue and insult each other. Too much pleasantness is so fake, so you really got it right. I loved the dialogue between them. I noticed a few grammatical errors, but nothing too big. Great work!
11/2/2014 c3 170A Sirius Crush On Moony
Poor Harry! The overuse of italics was good. It really added to it. It was really sad, though. I don't like Harry/Ginny, but don't we all want Harry to be happy? He'll probably find out sooner or later, and like the final line says, it will break both of their hearts. I liked the use of the prompt, and I thought both Harry and Ginny were very in-character. Good job!
170A Sirius Crush On MoonyPoor Harry! The overuse of italics was good. It really added to it. It was really sad, though. I don't like Harry/Ginny, but don't we all want Harry to be happy? He'll probably find out sooner or later, and like the final line says, it will break both of their hearts. I liked the use of the prompt, and I thought both Harry and Ginny were very in-character. Good job!
10/26/2014 c2 A Sirius Crush On Moony
This was sweet. Actually, it really made me smile a lot. The fact that both of them were planning on proposing and they were both such fails, they never managed to do it. It was sweet. I know I already said that but siriusly, that's how I would describe it. I loved the ending, especially the line - 'Yeah, sure, as long as you tell me I'm the best every day.' That was adorable. Great fic!
This was sweet. Actually, it really made me smile a lot. The fact that both of them were planning on proposing and they were both such fails, they never managed to do it. It was sweet. I know I already said that but siriusly, that's how I would describe it. I loved the ending, especially the line - 'Yeah, sure, as long as you tell me I'm the best every day.' That was adorable. Great fic!
10/18/2014 c1 acciounicorn9412
I love this! very good portrayal of the two I think! do you know how many of these you're going to do?
I love this! very good portrayal of the two I think! do you know how many of these you're going to do?