for Blonde and Blue Experiment10/24/2014 c1 
7freakypoet33
funny. the bad part is I could almost see it going down like this, lol. not one to make suggestions usually cause I think everyone should do their own thing, but might be easier to read if you broke it up every time you switch character speech. anywho, fun times!
7freakypoet33funny. the bad part is I could almost see it going down like this, lol. not one to make suggestions usually cause I think everyone should do their own thing, but might be easier to read if you broke it up every time you switch character speech. anywho, fun times!
10/20/2014 c1 1StaticMissi
It is very run together and a little difficult to read, but I like the concept.
1StaticMissiIt is very run together and a little difficult to read, but I like the concept.