for Up and Down2/11/2018 c13 
1MurphytheProphet
Oooh! 'If' is one of Kipling's best poems! I probably wouldn't have recognized it without the prompt, but that last line is so fitting. As long as the rest of the story follows the next lines: "and lose, and start again at your beginnings/ and never breathe a word about your loss"
I am a lifelong crew member of the good ship KyoHaru, and I want him to earn his forgiveness.
1MurphytheProphetOooh! 'If' is one of Kipling's best poems! I probably wouldn't have recognized it without the prompt, but that last line is so fitting. As long as the rest of the story follows the next lines: "and lose, and start again at your beginnings/ and never breathe a word about your loss"
I am a lifelong crew member of the good ship KyoHaru, and I want him to earn his forgiveness.
11/5/2016 c16 11FicsFromAnAnbuNin
I kind of hoped that he would get rejected or at least that she would reject him more times before letting him talk to her. He got a little obsessive near the end. The story was really good though and I hope that you take care of yourself.
11FicsFromAnAnbuNinI kind of hoped that he would get rejected or at least that she would reject him more times before letting him talk to her. He got a little obsessive near the end. The story was really good though and I hope that you take care of yourself.
11/5/2016 c14 FicsFromAnAnbuNin
Dang it Huni. I hope that Kyoya doesn't just magically fix everything.
Dang it Huni. I hope that Kyoya doesn't just magically fix everything.
11/5/2016 c10 FicsFromAnAnbuNin
Kamiko needs to chill, but she also needs to be told what is really going on.
Kamiko needs to chill, but she also needs to be told what is really going on.
11/5/2016 c9 FicsFromAnAnbuNin
This chapter was kind of strange, but it was good. By the way, I hope that you get better soon and take care of yourself.
This chapter was kind of strange, but it was good. By the way, I hope that you get better soon and take care of yourself.
9/9/2016 c16 58tmwillson3
After reading your other story, I ended up looking to see if you had other stories. When I read, I have a habit of sending one big review at the end if it's a finished story because I just want to read. Old habits die hard. I'm sorry you have to be subject to a lack of reviews, but I'm very thankful that you don't hold stories hostage. I hate it when authors do that, and I make sure not to do that in my own writing because of it. I'm very glad that you took the time you needed to deal with personal issues; you always come first.
As for the story itself, I like seeing stories that are inspired by music, which is what drew me in. I especially like ABBA music. It was a good story. Personally, I like longer chapters, but everyone is different. You managed to put a lot into those short chapters and created a suitable punishment for Kyoya in the form of Kamiko. I liked Fuyumi a lot in it as well. It's hard for me to see Kyoya beg, but after so many rejections, I will cut him some slack. Thank you for finishing it. An epilogue is something I always love, but if you have no desire to write one, then don't.
58tmwillson3After reading your other story, I ended up looking to see if you had other stories. When I read, I have a habit of sending one big review at the end if it's a finished story because I just want to read. Old habits die hard. I'm sorry you have to be subject to a lack of reviews, but I'm very thankful that you don't hold stories hostage. I hate it when authors do that, and I make sure not to do that in my own writing because of it. I'm very glad that you took the time you needed to deal with personal issues; you always come first.
As for the story itself, I like seeing stories that are inspired by music, which is what drew me in. I especially like ABBA music. It was a good story. Personally, I like longer chapters, but everyone is different. You managed to put a lot into those short chapters and created a suitable punishment for Kyoya in the form of Kamiko. I liked Fuyumi a lot in it as well. It's hard for me to see Kyoya beg, but after so many rejections, I will cut him some slack. Thank you for finishing it. An epilogue is something I always love, but if you have no desire to write one, then don't.
9/4/2016 c16 4BxBforever
Congratulations! This story had been one of my favorites for a long time, but i couldn't really get save it, since it didn't end. Two years is a long time, but you didn't give up; you made it!
4BxBforeverCongratulations! This story had been one of my favorites for a long time, but i couldn't really get save it, since it didn't end. Two years is a long time, but you didn't give up; you made it!