for New Day, New Night10/25/2016 c8 ValkyrieKnight96
Chris: The ending was awesome.
Michael: You thinking everything is awesome.
Chris: That's because everything I think is awesome, IS awesome.
Chris: The ending was awesome.
Michael: You thinking everything is awesome.
Chris: That's because everything I think is awesome, IS awesome.
9/8/2016 c8 KnightyNight
"Dawn of A New Day" fits perfectly here, very nice work on this short but good story of reuniting these two, honestly, thank you for this... 3
"Dawn of A New Day" fits perfectly here, very nice work on this short but good story of reuniting these two, honestly, thank you for this... 3
3/22/2016 c8 Guest
Wow
Wow
8/16/2015 c2 Disappointed
Sorry, but you made Link into an unlovable, arrogant, overly-perfect Gary-Stu. Also, as a matter of fact, he's 16 in the game, not 21. I'll stop reading now.
Sorry, but you made Link into an unlovable, arrogant, overly-perfect Gary-Stu. Also, as a matter of fact, he's 16 in the game, not 21. I'll stop reading now.
2/22/2015 c6 
9Lamucorta
This might be the only fic I've ever read that actually bothers to show Auru's character. Even better than that, it makes him a likable character.
I feel like the portal science was a bit overdone or the scene had more expositions than necesary, but the stry is still going well.
9LamucortaThis might be the only fic I've ever read that actually bothers to show Auru's character. Even better than that, it makes him a likable character.
I feel like the portal science was a bit overdone or the scene had more expositions than necesary, but the stry is still going well.
2/21/2015 c2 Lamucorta
The only thing that bugs me about this is, Why would Zelde given them her blessing to star their own militia, instead of working directly under the crown instead?
But it's just a minor thing. Everything else is fine so far.
The only thing that bugs me about this is, Why would Zelde given them her blessing to star their own militia, instead of working directly under the crown instead?
But it's just a minor thing. Everything else is fine so far.
1/1/2015 c8 18EquinoxWolf
This story was good and the writing was fluid. However, I feel like this story could have gone further since you set it up with the rangers, the oocca university, the twilight armor, and Zennel; most of which have appeared but not served any significant purpose. I'm content with what's here, but that's my opinion.
18EquinoxWolfThis story was good and the writing was fluid. However, I feel like this story could have gone further since you set it up with the rangers, the oocca university, the twilight armor, and Zennel; most of which have appeared but not served any significant purpose. I'm content with what's here, but that's my opinion.
12/31/2014 c8 XlDragonlX
I was expecting a full blown story out of this but the author could just take all of the chapters put them together and call it a one shot
I was expecting a full blown story out of this but the author could just take all of the chapters put them together and call it a one shot
12/30/2014 c3 NeoRedDawn
I love your writing style, both fluid and efficient. I suppose this is just an unimportant tidbit, and it really doesn't take away from the story at all, but how can an ancient society have coffee pots? I judo uni that rather amusing. I still love it so far :)
I love your writing style, both fluid and efficient. I suppose this is just an unimportant tidbit, and it really doesn't take away from the story at all, but how can an ancient society have coffee pots? I judo uni that rather amusing. I still love it so far :)