for Flowers for a Ghost10/19/2014 c1 
78Aquarius Galuxy
I enjoyed this - Tenten's reactions and emotions are very real, and I like the support network of friends Tenten has around her to help pull her from her grief. Also enjoyed the scene at the graveyard, especially the line "Letting go of you... was the hardest thing I have ever done".
There's a couple of typos in here - "loose" and one other I can't remember offhand.
Do write more NejiTen, I would love to see more from you!
78Aquarius GaluxyI enjoyed this - Tenten's reactions and emotions are very real, and I like the support network of friends Tenten has around her to help pull her from her grief. Also enjoyed the scene at the graveyard, especially the line "Letting go of you... was the hardest thing I have ever done".
There's a couple of typos in here - "loose" and one other I can't remember offhand.
Do write more NejiTen, I would love to see more from you!
10/19/2014 c1 3LuvleeCookieChan
Very beautiful piece! I love how the assesment of Tenten's feelings toward Neji's death was handled by you. I always felt that her reaction in the manga was very muted and was not enough for me. She was one of Neji's closest friends after all. You did a good job of expressing her feelings of sadness, despair and depression. Great job!
3LuvleeCookieChanVery beautiful piece! I love how the assesment of Tenten's feelings toward Neji's death was handled by you. I always felt that her reaction in the manga was very muted and was not enough for me. She was one of Neji's closest friends after all. You did a good job of expressing her feelings of sadness, despair and depression. Great job!