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11/7/2014 c6 2Arctic Fox72
Why would...why...uhh...why would a GOD take part in a tournament? I can't wrap my head around that.
11/7/2014 c6 9Legendary Fairy
Nice chapter, and I hate so much cliffhanger, but only cliffhangers, but at the same time it's okay, you don't want to ruin the surprise. )

So Mega Evolution are banned for now, that was unlucky for Paul, but he didn't know that, and Mike seems to have hit on someone, while the boys should of Team Unova should watch out what they're saying.

However I liked it, continue it. -
11/7/2014 c6 14nicranger
Hey I think your doing great and as for that 'guest' I say that if you think its so terrible then right your own! Instead of criticizing the story give him some input to make it better! You flamers are annoying as hell.
11/4/2014 c5 5The Man Known as nWore
Update soon?
10/31/2014 c5 WhiteEagle1985
Interesting story so far! I'll watch for updates to this!
10/26/2014 c5 1Ruby097
wow excellent chapter. I hope next round of kalos team is with those traitors and i hope traitors lose badly. You are doing nice work. Hope you continue to update sooner
10/25/2014 c5 Red Alfa
So team Kalos moves on nice man that was a funny name Were sexy and we no it gosh i actually laughed when i read that team name. Well cant wait for the next battle to see my oc in action anyways keep up with the good work
10/25/2014 c1 5SaixTheLegendaryBloodUmbreon
Good story. I honestly would of killed the traitors the second they sent out their pokemon.
10/23/2014 c3 Guest
Is Ash getting all his pokemon back? It was not very clear from the flashback. Also where is pikachu? You said hevwas with Ash when he was attacked but now he is just gone. Sry if this sounds like a flame this tory is great though. P.S love Primeape's entrance punching a pokeball into Dawn's face.
10/25/2014 c5 7Lucifers Descendant
Type disadvantage my but Blaziken did it woooooooooooo!
10/25/2014 c5 14nicranger
Liking it so far man. Keep up the good work.
10/25/2014 c5 9Legendary Fairy
Nice chapter. *sweatdropping* Wow...never expected Gary to try and hit on my OC, but I like it, and also I like the chapter, however really, what a strange name for the Team that battled Team Kalos, but I liked the battles, continue it this way. :D
10/23/2014 c3 Guest
Ash will be getting all his old pokemon back right? It just seemed a little unclear to me from the flashback. P.S love Primeape's entrance fits it perfectly and was hilarious.
10/25/2014 c4 1Ruby097
wow really interesting chapter. Can't wait to see how ash gets his pokemon back and how would ash reveal himself. Hope you update next chapter soon
10/24/2014 c4 Red Alfa
Not bad chap i like how you introduced the oc oh and btw you did a great job introducing my oc. Cant wait for the next chap and keep up with the good work also
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