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3/12/2015 c10 Red Alfa
Awesome chap with lots of great battle scene, so the score is 2-1 and dam i forgot N would have a legendary wonder how my oc will do facing Reshirama. So chris is all calm wonder if he's ready to face Hilbert. Well as always keep up with the great work.
3/12/2015 c10 9Legendary Fairy
Nice chapter I enjoyed it.

Can't wait for the next one.
3/12/2015 c10 7Lucifers Descendant
Kamikaze with blazeken lol victory type disadvantage nothing to him and no ties woo victory and can't wait for the legendarys good luck
3/6/2015 c3 Deathreaper355
OC'S BE TOO OP
3/1/2015 c1 Guest
Whos everyones favorit oc
2/27/2015 c9 2ThaDerpyZoroark
Wow I'm impressed this is a very good story, keep up the amazing work

Btw. You confused me abit with Chris's Lucario because its red and silver there is another fanfic with the same patten and she is named rukaria in 'rukario romance' I thought it was the same one and it confused me to hell
2/24/2015 c1 BANKAIZEN
nice
2/11/2015 c9 Guest
Ash should have ho oh
2/8/2015 c9 1FireFox180
I really like this story good to see it still going on, can't wait to read the next chapter! :)
2/2/2015 c9 2Arctic Fox72
So you finally dropped the relationship between Arctic and Winter, huh? I was wondering when that would happen. Anyway, for the legendary thing, I have the perfect one for this. My OC. I have a OC mew that is a shadow mew. I have a entire story about him as well. Shadowed Destiny. So that is my choice, whatever this is for. Mew.
2/1/2015 c9 WhiteEagle1985
An awesome chapter here!
2/1/2015 c9 5The Man Known as nWore
Great work. Also, as far as Mike getting a girlfriend, how about that Relen girl from Ch. 6?
2/1/2015 c9 Red Alfa
Awesome chap and cool we got to see a little backstory on chris and how he feels towards facing Hilberts Zekrom. And we got to see Ash first date wuth Iris. As always keep up with the great work
2/1/2015 c9 1Deathwatch 45
Great chapter. It's been a while since you last updated. Update soon.
2/1/2015 c9 9Legendary Fairy
Hi, I was surprised that you updated. )

However I think I told you what Legendary Pokemon I wanted to pick out for my OC, right?
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